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the_best_part
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Thu Jul-24-08 09:50 AM

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"untitled"


  

          

what is this strange fruit
that oozes from my womb
hot lava tears
blackened by
clenched fists
full of loss

between thighs
grief swells
pain throbs
longing to be
pounded
away

dead
the
screams

awaken
the
dreams

shove the earth
inside
and still
an emptiness
will remain

murder it
again and
again

i will find
a way back
eventually

until then

even u
will do me
good
just to
stab at this
hysteric filled
rind of
the strangest kind
of fruit
until it ripens
and relieves me
of its stench
and weight.

peace







  

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RE: untitled
Jul 24th 2008
1
RE: untitled
Jul 24th 2008
2
RE: untitled
Jul 24th 2008
3
i think you're one of the writers on here
Jul 24th 2008
4
CoSign
Aug 05th 2008
10
RE: untitled
Jul 27th 2008
5
RE: untitled
Jul 31st 2008
6
Big ^s
Jul 31st 2008
7
RE: untitled
Jul 31st 2008
8
O
Aug 01st 2008
9

southernboy_423
Member since May 12th 2005
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Thu Jul-24-08 09:58 AM

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1. "RE: untitled"
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i love ur word selection....nice


"my third eye like pink eye...seen and contagious" - Common Sense

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http://www.myspace.com/jussleepmusic

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Thu Jul-24-08 01:44 PM

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2. "RE: untitled"
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Slivers of "hurt" / "pain" are laced thru~out ^this^ pCe.

I "always" like your writings -- *No Doubt* -- but the more I read ^this^ -- the more it hurts.


*Tear~fully Nice*




Beautiful Baby BTW ...


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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HueyNewton
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Thu Jul-24-08 01:51 PM

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3. "RE: untitled"
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i can always appreciate the true talent of a wordsmith like ya'self
this makes a poet ponder . .? / if i'm from saturn r u from jupiter?

I am an oxymoron
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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mindful
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Thu Jul-24-08 07:15 PM

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4. "i think you're one of the writers on here"
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who truly pays attention (or so it seems) to your line breaks...

a steady flow can always be found in everything you post.

until then

even u
will do me
good
just to
stab at this
hysteric filled
rind of
the strangest kind
of fruit
until it ripens
and relieves me
of its stench
and weight.

*nods* nice to see you back again. Peace~

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http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

you are the master of every situation.

  

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KnowOne
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Tue Aug-05-08 07:48 AM

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10. "CoSign"
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n/m

_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

IG: KnowOne215 | PS+ ID: KnowOne215

  

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ASIEM
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Sun Jul-27-08 08:43 PM

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5. "RE: untitled"
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i like this alot but for real is this an abortion? I am moved deeply by the impplications but the fact that women experience so many forms of strange fruit and bare so much burden unseen the man in me does not want to assume I overstand

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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the_best_part
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Thu Jul-31-08 10:53 AM

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6. "RE: untitled"
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Thu Jul-31-08 10:54 AM by the_best_part

  

          

its about the loss of a child. however that may happen. i suspect women that have had abortions and regrets about it may feel this.

btw, thanks for the reads/comments, folk.

  

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empro
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Thu Jul-31-08 07:23 PM

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7. "Big ^s"
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You stay finding ways to make words flow so smoothly to me

Thanks for sharing

Stay up

  

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J Wyze from Crown A Thornz
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Thu Jul-31-08 09:28 PM

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8. "RE: untitled"
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dope.

Languages are laws, ammendments are just lies/And labels change history right before your eyes

-J Wyze from Crown A Thornz

  

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Zin
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Fri Aug-01-08 01:20 PM

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9. "O"
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O 8 i c u

sig.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Guess who's Back

  

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