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75903, untitled Posted by the_best_part, Thu Jul-24-08 09:50 AM
what is this strange fruit that oozes from my womb hot lava tears blackened by clenched fists full of loss
between thighs grief swells pain throbs longing to be pounded away
dead the screams
awaken the dreams
shove the earth inside and still an emptiness will remain
murder it again and again
i will find a way back eventually
until then
even u will do me good just to stab at this hysteric filled rind of the strangest kind of fruit until it ripens and relieves me of its stench and weight.
peace
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75904, RE: untitled Posted by southernboy_423, Thu Jul-24-08 09:58 AM
i love ur word selection....nice
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75909, RE: untitled Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Thu Jul-24-08 01:44 PM
Slivers of "hurt" / "pain" are laced thru~out ^this^ pCe.
I "always" like your writings -- *No Doubt* -- but the more I read ^this^ -- the more it hurts.
*Tear~fully Nice*
Beautiful Baby BTW ... :)
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75912, RE: untitled Posted by HueyNewton, Thu Jul-24-08 01:51 PM
i can always appreciate the true talent of a wordsmith like ya'self this makes a poet ponder . .? / if i'm from saturn r u from jupiter?
I am an oxymoron -xxx
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75926, i think you're one of the writers on here Posted by mindful, Thu Jul-24-08 07:15 PM
who truly pays attention (or so it seems) to your line breaks...
a steady flow can always be found in everything you post.
until then
even u will do me good just to stab at this hysteric filled rind of the strangest kind of fruit until it ripens and relieves me of its stench and weight.
*nods* nice to see you back again. Peace~
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76101, CoSign Posted by KnowOne, Tue Aug-05-08 07:48 AM
n/m
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75956, RE: untitled Posted by ASIEM, Sun Jul-27-08 08:43 PM
i like this alot but for real is this an abortion? I am moved deeply by the impplications but the fact that women experience so many forms of strange fruit and bare so much burden unseen the man in me does not want to assume I overstand
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76013, RE: untitled Posted by the_best_part, Thu Jul-31-08 10:53 AM
its about the loss of a child. however that may happen. i suspect women that have had abortions and regrets about it may feel this.
btw, thanks for the reads/comments, folk.
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76028, Big ^s Posted by empro, Thu Jul-31-08 07:23 PM
You stay finding ways to make words flow so smoothly to me
Thanks for sharing
Stay up ;)
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76031, RE: untitled Posted by J Wyze from Crown A Thornz, Thu Jul-31-08 09:28 PM
dope.
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76050, O Posted by Zin, Fri Aug-01-08 01:20 PM
O 8 i c u
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