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the_best_part
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Tue Jan-30-07 09:31 PM

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"you are all"


  

          

you slid beneath my skin
like moss underneath river stones
it felt slick and
unnerving
i
couldnt grip
couldnt hold
couldnt hang on
you
made me feel
free, not free
uncontrolled
you didnt push me
i
slipped away
couldnt grasp the
concept of you
the unknown
gripped around my heart
a clench of terror
i saw the worst in me
in your eyes
i saw the best part
there too
i couldnt be the
all in we
couldnt be the all
that you are, i
had to become something
new
something with grip
a strong hold of self
assured an antagonist of fear
i had to flow
float away
without even the hope
that you'd understand

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
So Nice ...
Jan 30th 2007
1
RE: you are all
Jan 30th 2007
2
i like that title
Jan 31st 2007
3

PhotoSynthesis
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Tue Jan-30-07 11:23 PM

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1. "So Nice ..."
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... to see your name on the board again! -- *Yep*

Even nicer to see your words -- like soothing balm, written for itching eyes --



*Word*





A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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ASIEM
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Tue Jan-30-07 11:26 PM

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2. "RE: you are all"
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grip letting go slipping holding on! all that, yeh i can relate.
this gotta be universal for those that love deeply?

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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UncleClimax
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Wed Jan-31-07 09:54 AM

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3. "i like that title"
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see more than a bit of ambivalence in this piece....captured that feeling really well...holla!

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