These Tears are inking
Liberating sentiments
My soul purified

whatup ya'll? i dont usually write haiku but dudes post the other day 365 haiku inspired me to try it.
Let me know what ya'll think with some feedback and constructive crit; if ya can

i see some views but no replys
whatup ya'll how bout some feedback one way or the other it all helps

I'm NOT a haiku expert -- But I know what I like, and I like this! --


Now ...


While you're waiting for some feedback and constructive crit on YOUR work -- Be sure and peep other folks work and respond.


*Give summm / Git summm*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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