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63003, Power of Writing
Posted by Monk, Mon Jan-08-07 01:32 PM
These Tears are inking
Liberating sentiments
My soul purified
whatup ya'll? i dont usually write haiku but dudes post the other day 365 haiku inspired me to try it.
Let me know what ya'll think with some feedback and constructive crit; if ya can
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63066, RE: Power of Writing
Posted by Monk, Thu Jan-11-07 12:29 PM
i see some views but no replys
whatup ya'll how bout some feedback one way or the other it all helps
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63082, RE: Power of Writing
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Thu Jan-11-07 10:44 PM
I'm NOT a haiku expert -- But I know what I like, and I like this! -- :D
Now ...
While you're waiting for some feedback and constructive crit on YOUR work -- Be sure and peep other folks work and respond.
*Give summm / Git summm*
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