Some of the times gone by without a noticing eye I am watching you walking as fast as you can without even noticing without a noticing eye some of the time goes by unnoticed
Blank eyes Open Wide No Expression without a smile
Sometimes I know you cry without a noticing eye I am watching you moving without a care for your life without even noticing without a noticing eye some of the time goes by unnoticed
Blank eyes Open wide No acceptance in rejection
Sometimes I see your light without a noticing eye I am watching you expressing and accepting who you are without even noticing without a noticing eye some of the time goes by unnoticed
<<<<<<<<<I take a thought and expand upon it. I turn it around and upside down to get another perspective>>>>>>>>>>>>
it reminds me of a form of writing (which escapes me now) that we had to do for my poetry class back during my college days *dang what is the name of that darn form*... this was refreshing.
http://worthwatering.blogspot.com Can it be I stayed away too long?/ Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/ It's not my thing trying to get back/ But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five
3. "<<smiling from both of your responses>>" In response to Reply # 2
..yeah...It just came through..if there is a style to it I would love to know so I can at least say I know how to write in that particular style ...didn't know....
you two are a couple of my favorite writers on here and it feels good to have feedback from ya'll...
and sis ...I just might record it..sultry..smooth..dim bar type of sound to it...
Love to you two...
<Peace is better with dark chocoate and red wine>
<<<<<<<<<I take a thought and expand upon it. I turn it around and upside down to get another perspective>>>>>>>>>>>>