Some of the times gone by
without a noticing eye
I am watching you
walking as fast as you can
without even noticing
without a noticing eye
some of the time goes by unnoticed

Blank eyes
Open Wide
No Expression without a smile

Sometimes I know you cry
without a noticing eye
I am watching you
moving without a care for your life
without even noticing
without a noticing eye
some of the time goes by unnoticed

Blank eyes
Open wide
No acceptance in rejection

Sometimes I see your light
without a noticing eye
I am watching you
expressing and accepting
who you are
without even noticing
without a noticing eye
some of the time goes by unnoticed



<<<<<<<<<I take a thought and expand upon it.
I turn it around and upside down to get another perspective>>>>>>>>>>>>

www.myspace.com/hearheartbeat

it reminds me of a form of writing (which escapes me now) that we had to do for my poetry class back during my college days *dang what is the name of that darn form*... this was refreshing.

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La magie, est dans ses yeux.
le prodige est dans son âme.

I agree. I would love to *hear* it.

..yeah...It just came through..if there is a style to it I would love to know so I can at least say I know how to write in that particular style :)...didn't know....

you two are a couple of my favorite writers on here and it feels good to have feedback from ya'll...

and sis ...I just might record it..sultry..smooth..dim bar type of sound to it...

Love to you two...

<Peace is better with dark chocoate and red wine>


<<<<<<<<<I take a thought and expand upon it.
I turn it around and upside down to get another perspective>>>>>>>>>>>>

www.myspace.com/hearheartbeat

A very peaceful piece..I hope to read more