im just getting back into writing so please dont judge me. this was something that was just on my heart and i just want a lil feedback...

ALONE...

like a cold breeze in the middle of the night

dead silence, not even the sound of a local footstep

nonetheless , a footstep at all

the leaves fall ... wind blows like a mighty hurricane

damned and slain, without a trace of pain

sad drops of rain... covers my window pane.

no tears of joy just sorrow

hoping and praying for another tomorrow

but thats not in my future ...

my futures like my past...

full of lost lust, empty like a plaster cast

heading for DISAS ...TER

no strength to bear bad new

lost without hope, without fear, without clues

mad blues

cant wrap my mind around all that, its time to fall back

COLD ... like a breeze in the middle of the night

like im ALONE ... DEAD SILENCE

(((Welcome))) ... and nice first post.


The silence was deafening! --

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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read the rules the best way to get feed back is to give it that said...
i go this i hope to see more nice title nice flow roll wit it

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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