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ak_reborn
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Sat Jan-27-07 04:34 AM

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"Lost Call"


  

          




It was once a while ago,
that it had occured,
reaction,i never had one,
my visions were blurred,
was i seeing falsely?
my inner spirit forced me,
words were too much,
and my other senses aborted me,
lost in my surroundings,
my pupil widened at the site,
of a figure,
too much to figure out why i hadn't said hi,
or hey,or how ya doing?
i just stared,
because her frame was so amusing,
or maybe,just maybe i was scared,
her eyez sparkled like a gem stone,
blue sapphire,
my heart on fire,
coz the one i let go was the one,
a lost call,
a helpless fool who fell for nothing but her image.



Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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RE: Lost Call
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ASIEM
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Sat Jan-27-07 02:08 PM

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1. "RE: Lost Call"
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nice imagery liked this

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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ms mimi diva
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Sat Jan-27-07 07:07 PM

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I think we've all been there! Thanks for the drop!

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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ak_reborn
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Sun Jan-28-07 06:05 AM

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Thnkz for peepin it ms diva and asiem.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Mon Jan-29-07 12:09 AM

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You painted a nice image here in "Lost Call" -- But the painting don't quite look finished.

Paint some more! --

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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You painted a nice image here in "Lost Call" -- But the painting don't quite look finished.

Paint some more! --

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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ak_reborn
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Yea ok,i guess it aint quite finished

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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