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63396, Lost Call
Posted by ak_reborn, Sat Jan-27-07 04:34 AM
It was once a while ago,
that it had occured,
reaction,i never had one,
my visions were blurred,
was i seeing falsely?
my inner spirit forced me,
words were too much,
and my other senses aborted me,
lost in my surroundings,
my pupil widened at the site,
of a figure,
too much to figure out why i hadn't said hi,
or hey,or how ya doing?
i just stared,
because her frame was so amusing,
or maybe,just maybe i was scared,
her eyez sparkled like a gem stone,
blue sapphire,
my heart on fire,
coz the one i let go was the one,
a lost call,
a helpless fool who fell for nothing but her image.
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63401, RE: Lost Call
Posted by ASIEM, Sat Jan-27-07 02:08 PM
nice imagery liked this
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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63406, RE: Lost Call
Posted by ms mimi diva, Sat Jan-27-07 07:07 PM
I think we've all been there! Thanks for the drop!
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63419, RE: Lost Call
Posted by ak_reborn, Sun Jan-28-07 06:05 AM
Thnkz for peepin it ms diva and asiem.
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63439, RE: Lost Call
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Jan-29-07 12:09 AM
You painted a nice image here in "Lost Call" -- But the painting don't quite look finished.
Paint some more! -- :9
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63440, RE: Lost Call
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Jan-29-07 12:09 AM
You painted a nice image here in "Lost Call" -- But the painting don't quite look finished.
Paint some more! -- :9
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63448, RE: Lost Call
Posted by ak_reborn, Mon Jan-29-07 11:36 AM
Yea ok,i guess it aint quite finished
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