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marijane
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Sat Jan-13-07 09:45 PM

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"finite"


  

          

It's like rain on your wedding day...

That's what I'd say if we'd gotten that far
the ironies had babies
we sat in silence
loving the akward space
peeling at the air
aching for rememberence of bliss
moments past
the sheets were still rustled
her name fresh on his lips
his skin newley embedded in hernails
without erotica
this was the end of an era

the peace that calms the dying
blew ferry dust over their last kiss
eyes turned keys of destiny and
LOCKED
she knew
he pretended he didn't
as she didn't turn back
and he didn't wait
driving off
she smiled


I smiled
knowing i hadn't lost
wishing I had won

in secret symposiums
with sweetened symphonies
and hip-hop hearts
beating
you know who you are
my inspiration
I'll always love you.

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WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN

I swear I'm a marry an OKP


Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
@ least it was cathrtic for me
Jan 17th 2007
1
RE: @ least it was cathrtic for me
Jan 19th 2007
4
      Thank you very much
Jan 19th 2007
6
           yeah...i was a little concerned
Jan 24th 2007
8
RE: finite
Jan 17th 2007
2
RE: finite
Jan 18th 2007
3
No that was the last time
Jan 19th 2007
5
finding peace in letting go, but keeping the love = priceless
Jan 20th 2007
7
It hurts to let go
Jan 25th 2007
9
thanx this is STILL one of my favorite pieces
Jan 26th 2007
10

marijane
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Wed Jan-17-07 12:31 AM

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1. "@ least it was cathrtic for me"
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happy new year writer's block.

_____________________________________
WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN

I swear I'm a marry an OKP


Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...

  

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invisible ink
Member since Apr 07th 2003
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Fri Jan-19-07 10:45 AM

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4. "RE: @ least it was cathrtic for me"
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glad you found your voice again...always a fan...miss k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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marijane
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Fri Jan-19-07 03:15 PM

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6. "Thank you very much"
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Glad to see there were those with flashlights...shining through my darkness. Many Blessings

Keep it up

_____________________________________
WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN

I swear I'm a marry an OKP


Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...

  

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invisible ink
Member since Apr 07th 2003
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Wed Jan-24-07 02:18 PM

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8. "yeah...i was a little concerned"
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ur previous pieces were so dead on ...and then...u seemed to be hurt and confused...angry...but i was hoping it was coming to a close...

keep surfacing...miss k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Wed Jan-17-07 01:11 AM

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2. "RE: finite"
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*Bitter~Sweetness In The Mixxx*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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ASIEM
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Thu Jan-18-07 12:36 AM

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3. "RE: finite"
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sounds like you just might go back for more hhhmmm?
nice read

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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marijane
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Fri Jan-19-07 02:26 PM

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5. "No that was the last time"
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scouts honar. It was good but th leaves of love are falling and my heart is wintering to that situation....not the person just the situation.

_____________________________________
WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN

I swear I'm a marry an OKP


Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...

  

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mindful
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Sat Jan-20-07 01:05 PM

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7. "finding peace in letting go, but keeping the love = priceless"
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i really connected with the following lines:

without erotica
this was the end of an era

the peace that calms the dying
blew ferry dust over their last kiss
eyes turned keys of destiny and
LOCKED
she knew
he pretended he didn't

*nods* Peace~

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http://msmind.wordpress.com|this life
http://ladybugstheworld.wordpress.com|my words

Quit being cheap nigga freedom
ain't free. -Mos Def

no half-steppin in '07.

  

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Shakeet Lokh Em
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Thu Jan-25-07 04:59 PM

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9. "It hurts to let go"
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But you write out the pain well.

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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marijane
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Fri Jan-26-07 12:14 PM

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10. "thanx this is STILL one of my favorite pieces"
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I can feel it even when i forget i was the one that was there. Keep shining!

_____________________________________
WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN

I swear I'm a marry an OKP


Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...

  

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