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phelonious
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Sat Jan-06-07 01:05 AM

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"Dinner For Two"


          

She told me that my cologne
Reminded her of an old friend
I didn't know whether
To smile or frown
Shyly I chuckled
I could slice the tension
With a knife
But that would leave me
Less time to butter my bread
Silence was ahead
It passed
One minute
Two minutes
Three minutes
Four minutes
Several later
Still at the table.....

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Subject Author Message Date ID
More?
Jan 09th 2007
1
RE: Dinner For Two
Jan 11th 2007
2
the awkwardness of silence in situations like these
Jan 20th 2007
3
RE: Dinner For Two
Jan 22nd 2007
4
RE: Dinner For Two
Jan 24th 2007
5

PhotoSynthesis
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Tue Jan-09-07 01:17 AM

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1. "More?"
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I'm still hungry! --


Does salad come with ^that^ buttered bread?

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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nardtruth
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Thu Jan-11-07 11:58 PM

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2. "RE: Dinner For Two"
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where is the rest?????

  

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mindful
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Sat Jan-20-07 01:14 PM

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3. "the awkwardness of silence in situations like these"
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always leave me feeling baffled...

i was ready to bash the cliche'

I could slice the tension
With a knife

~ here, but...

But that would leave me
Less time to butter my bread

you gave it a new twist, and that could only be admired. *nods*

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ain't free. -Mos Def

no half-steppin in '07.

  

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invisible ink
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Mon Jan-22-07 06:04 PM

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4. "RE: Dinner For Two"
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where's the rest?...you got me all caught up...nice drop...miss k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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phelonious
Member since May 21st 2005
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Wed Jan-24-07 11:18 AM

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5. "RE: Dinner For Two"
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The rest is silence.......I think I might follow it up with a view from the other side

http://www.youtube.com/user/cierno?feature=mhee


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