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| Topic subject | Dinner For Two |
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62973, Dinner For Two
Posted by phelonious, Sat Jan-06-07 01:05 AM
She told me that my cologne
Reminded her of an old friend
I didn't know whether
To smile or frown
Shyly I chuckled
I could slice the tension
With a knife
But that would leave me
Less time to butter my bread
Silence was ahead
It passed
One minute
Two minutes
Three minutes
Four minutes
Several later
Still at the table.....
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63024, More?
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Tue Jan-09-07 01:17 AM
I'm still hungry! -- :9
Does salad come with ^that^ buttered bread?
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63086, RE: Dinner For Two
Posted by nardtruth, Thu Jan-11-07 11:58 PM
where is the rest?????
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63250, the awkwardness of silence in situations like these
Posted by mindful, Sat Jan-20-07 01:14 PM
always leave me feeling baffled...
i was ready to bash the cliche'
I could slice the tension
With a knife
~ here, but...
But that would leave me
Less time to butter my bread
you gave it a new twist, and that could only be admired. *nods*
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63306, RE: Dinner For Two
Posted by invisible ink, Mon Jan-22-07 06:04 PM
where's the rest?...you got me all caught up...nice drop...miss k
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63335, RE: Dinner For Two
Posted by phelonious, Wed Jan-24-07 11:18 AM
The rest is silence.......I think I might follow it up with a view from the other side
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