I can’t say lifelong… cuz each minute requires it’s own moment of truth… like the second u said I was irresistable couldn’t have happened thinking lifelong is all I’m sayin…
cuz being deep in love is silly ain’t it? with prepaid and prepared kisses tasting like salt in an old wound…
I’d just like to be grounded with you… not deep inside where I cain’t see my way ‘round but eye to eye …u know?... I wanna be able to get moody and begin to complain when u walk out my door,down the creaky stairs, still trying to tiptoe without the neighbors hearing u….
I wanna appreciate your attempt at being a man who is concerned about things that don’t matter to us…. but keep old folk from gossipin’
course I cain’t say lifelong… to do that would hitch me up in some curious way to the notion that I cain’t enjoy you fully right now cuz I’m cute right now and so is you…
gaurantee if you take me out tonight …you’ll learn I don’t like slow dancing….i’m medium setlike with a little ummph in my hips and I may not have that lifelong you see.
so take it now… see if it fits your vernacular… and if by chance that and hour turns into something monumentous like a WHOLE day….and I’m caught up in cooking breakfast with your crisp white collar shirt on
it’s possible
I’ll say something like this could be lifelong (to myself)
u know…companion like and such I may start to fancy that we have something to work from that somehow you’ve convinced me..to meditate ona tomorrows time line and okay…I understand… I get it no one likes to dream holding hands alone. so let’s just say for the sake of sayin’ that this… is lifelong
so you can go ‘head and finish greasin’ my scalp and I can keep tending to the sweat falling off your bald head after you swim and dive and wade all up in thru me let’s just call it love
and see how long life holds on.
kimabe 8/2006
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if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.
cuz being deep in love is silly ain’t it? with prepaid and prepared kisses tasting like salt in an old wound…
I’d just like to be grounded with you… not deep inside where I cain’t see my way ‘round but eye to eye …u know?... I wanna be able to get moody and begin to complain when u walk out my door,down the creaky stairs, still trying to tiptoe without the neighbors hearing u….
I wanna appreciate your attempt at being a man who is concerned about things that don’t matter to us…. but keep old folk from gossipin’
lines. I had a smile on my face when i reached the above lines, and it stayed throughout the rest of the read. this was felt. Peace~
4. "RE: i really love this" In response to Reply # 2
yeah...i'm diggin' this piece too miss t...it's not my regular cut to the gritty style...but every once in awhile i like to put down some of my feminity on the boards.usually i keep these poems to myself...but i wanted to share this one...so thank you for feeling it just the same...k boogie
if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.
these thoughts elevate conjured feelings and make real what is often experienced in a moment, allowing time to stop
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
You write with such familiarity and intimacy, it makes the reader think you are speaking with an old friend, yet the work is always accessible--
Loved these lines:
cuz being deep in love is silly ain’t it? with prepaid and prepared kisses tasting like salt in an old wound…
I’d just like to be grounded with you… not deep inside where I cain’t see my way ‘round but eye to eye …u know?...
(Ahh, the rub, because if we are grounded how can we fly?)
I wanna be able to get moody and begin to complain when u walk out my door,down the creaky stairs, still trying to tiptoe without the neighbors hearing u….
I wanna appreciate your attempt at being a man who is concerned about things that don’t matter to us…. but keep old folk from gossipin’
Thank you, talented one!
http://worthwatering.blogspot.com Can it be I stayed away too long?/ Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/ It's not my thing trying to get back/ But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five
i have to admit...that's a pleasentry that i've learned from nikki giovanni, who always says...just put i down...so that's what i do...thank u....miss k
if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.
10. "Takin' It One Day @ A Time ..." In response to Reply # 0
Makes one wonder -- 'Bout a play on wordz ...
(((Lifelong)))
... The "life" of the couple -- Like until death do us part ...
...... Or the "life" of the relationship -- Like however long it lasts ...
I just LOVE your take on life & relationships ma'am -- So down to earth and E/Z to visualize --
*Feelin' It ^UP^*
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
i aint read nothing on okp worth reposting in a loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong time. till tonight.... this goes on my myspace....
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