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59387, extensions Posted by invisible ink, Tue Aug-15-06 03:24 PM
I can’t say lifelong… cuz each minute requires it’s own moment of truth… like the second u said I was irresistable couldn’t have happened thinking lifelong is all I’m sayin…
cuz being deep in love is silly ain’t it? with prepaid and prepared kisses tasting like salt in an old wound…
I’d just like to be grounded with you… not deep inside where I cain’t see my way ‘round but eye to eye …u know?... I wanna be able to get moody and begin to complain when u walk out my door,down the creaky stairs, still trying to tiptoe without the neighbors hearing u….
I wanna appreciate your attempt at being a man who is concerned about things that don’t matter to us…. but keep old folk from gossipin’
course I cain’t say lifelong… to do that would hitch me up in some curious way to the notion that I cain’t enjoy you fully right now cuz I’m cute right now and so is you…
gaurantee if you take me out tonight …you’ll learn I don’t like slow dancing….i’m medium setlike with a little ummph in my hips and I may not have that lifelong you see.
so take it now… see if it fits your vernacular… and if by chance that and hour turns into something monumentous like a WHOLE day….and I’m caught up in cooking breakfast with your crisp white collar shirt on
it’s possible
I’ll say something like this could be lifelong (to myself)
u know…companion like and such I may start to fancy that we have something to work from that somehow you’ve convinced me..to meditate ona tomorrows time line and okay…I understand… I get it no one likes to dream holding hands alone. so let’s just say for the sake of sayin’ that this… is lifelong
so you can go ‘head and finish greasin’ my scalp and I can keep tending to the sweat falling off your bald head after you swim and dive and wade all up in thru me let’s just call it love
and see how long life holds on.
kimabe 8/2006
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59389, RE: extensions Posted by freedomfighter, Tue Aug-15-06 04:58 PM
hot grooves on plastic drippings
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59390, i really love this Posted by mindful, Tue Aug-15-06 05:52 PM
i truly love this...
because of these
cuz being deep in love is silly ain’t it? with prepaid and prepared kisses tasting like salt in an old wound…
I’d just like to be grounded with you… not deep inside where I cain’t see my way ‘round but eye to eye …u know?... I wanna be able to get moody and begin to complain when u walk out my door,down the creaky stairs, still trying to tiptoe without the neighbors hearing u….
I wanna appreciate your attempt at being a man who is concerned about things that don’t matter to us…. but keep old folk from gossipin’
lines. I had a smile on my face when i reached the above lines, and it stayed throughout the rest of the read. this was felt. Peace~
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l'amour est la médecine fidèle d'un dieu.
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59413, RE: i really love this Posted by invisible ink, Wed Aug-16-06 09:52 AM
yeah...i'm diggin' this piece too miss t...it's not my regular cut to the gritty style...but every once in awhile i like to put down some of my feminity on the boards.usually i keep these poems to myself...but i wanted to share this one...so thank you for feeling it just the same...k boogie
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59408, Jesus Posted by ThaAnthology, Wed Aug-16-06 08:40 AM
I swear every time I read a piece I flash to the great poets of old. Nikki, Sonia, Gwendowlyn...
This is full, well-birthed, grounded, mooth, eloquent, tough, real, strong shit mayne...just plain excellent.
My humble opinion.
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59414, RE: Jesus Posted by invisible ink, Wed Aug-16-06 09:52 AM
Freedom and Ant...good lookin out...miss k
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59484, RE: extensions Posted by ASIEM, Fri Aug-18-06 08:19 AM
these thoughts elevate conjured feelings and make real what is often experienced in a moment, allowing time to stop
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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59500, very much so Posted by rgv, Fri Aug-18-06 12:48 PM
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59519, RE: extensions Posted by ms mimi diva, Sat Aug-19-06 04:25 AM
You write with such familiarity and intimacy, it makes the reader think you are speaking with an old friend, yet the work is always accessible--
Loved these lines:
cuz being deep in love is silly ain’t it? with prepaid and prepared kisses tasting like salt in an old wound…
I’d just like to be grounded with you… not deep inside where I cain’t see my way ‘round but eye to eye …u know?...
(Ahh, the rub, because if we are grounded how can we fly?)
I wanna be able to get moody and begin to complain when u walk out my door,down the creaky stairs, still trying to tiptoe without the neighbors hearing u….
I wanna appreciate your attempt at being a man who is concerned about things that don’t matter to us…. but keep old folk from gossipin’
Thank you, talented one!
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59617, RE: extensions Posted by invisible ink, Tue Aug-22-06 05:38 PM
i have to admit...that's a pleasentry that i've learned from nikki giovanni, who always says...just put i down...so that's what i do...thank u....miss k
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62247, Takin' It One Day @ A Time ... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Fri Dec-01-06 01:44 AM
Makes one wonder -- 'Bout a play on wordz ...
(((Lifelong)))
... The "life" of the couple -- Like until death do us part ...
...... Or the "life" of the relationship -- Like however long it lasts ...
I just LOVE your take on life & relationships ma'am -- So down to earth and E/Z to visualize -- :)
*Feelin' It ^UP^*
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62287, Hmmmm Posted by Winter Blaze, Sun Dec-03-06 07:00 PM
This piece resonates so much with me right now... definitely one of my favorites from you. Always a pleasure to read your words.
Kitkat
If fucking were graceful, I'd be your dancer
I have boarded the train to nowwhere waking up to find myself somewhere
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62295, damn K!!!!!! Posted by jayare214, Mon Dec-04-06 03:26 AM
damn K!!!!!
i aint read nothing on okp worth reposting in a loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong time. till tonight.... this goes on my myspace....
DAMN! i miss you boo... take care... -j
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62331, RE: damn K!!!!!! Posted by invisible ink, Tue Dec-05-06 08:37 PM
lol...you guys are so generous with ypur thoughts and love...i feel it even in the cold brooklyn air...i love yall...miss k
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62420, u really came out naked with this one... Posted by MUSE, Fri Dec-08-06 04:58 PM
"and see how long life holds on."
mmph
thank u for sharing a fragile yet strong heart of u... (not part, but heart)...
challenges one to be real and to truly define what one is saying, feeling and doing all in one breath (moment)
"is this worth a life-time to u?" is what keeps ringing in my ears...
i like this drop
blessed,
MUSE
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