i was born a man in time when boy was still a rank below earned merit
raised to conquer self made prisons fear rejected the demon in the mirror at last free behind drug induced states i lasted till seasons changed torment into a painful hope lifted in admission
never alone i give away what i kept sacred daily another life falls and rises talkin heads find serene beginnings
an element no longer a mystery i use as yet another tool carving a slow smile across the devide between i and others looking for something to hold to feel to last till rage turns and is no more a comfort in the absence of love...
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
2. "RE: *nodding head in appreciation*" In response to Reply # 1
thanks for peepin in
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
3. "this is stunningly beautiful" In response to Reply # 0
So many lines here, but notably...
"never alone i give away what i kept sacred daily another life falls and rises talkin heads find serene beginnings"
Love the idea of release of what was sacred....
and--
"an element no longer a mystery i use as yet another tool carving a slow smile across the devide between i and others looking for something to hold to feel to last till rage turns and is no more a comfort in the absence of love..."
The idea of healing the division between us and others...
well done.
http://worthwatering.blogspot.com Can it be I stayed away too long?/ Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/ It's not my thing trying to get back/ But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five
4. "RE: this is stunningly beautiful" In response to Reply # 3
thank you truly mimi sometimes i think what is best in us get's lost or at least misplaced
"in the absence of love"
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
8. "RE: mmmmmmm...." In response to Reply # 5 Fri Feb-16-07 07:11 AM by ASIEM
wow thanks invisible the pen wrote this One na mean? oh and yeh i welcome the opportunity
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
9. "RE: in the absence of love..." In response to Reply # 6
Nowachaoticthing that means alot thank you
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
7. "An IN~DENTION In My Heart ..." In response to Reply # 0
Right here:
>carving a slow smile >across the divide >between i and others >looking for something >to hold to feel to last >till rage turns and is >no more a comfort >in the absence >of love...
Actually -- the whole flow was a waterfall of emotion! -- *Felt*
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
10. "RE: in the absence of love..." In response to Reply # 0
the desperation is this stanza is intense and so real.
>raised to conquer >self made prisons >fear rejected the demon >in the mirror >at last free behind >drug induced states >i lasted till >seasons changed >torment into a painful >hope lifted in admission
and ...
> an element >no longer a mystery >i use as yet another tool >carving a slow smile >across the devide >between i and others >looking for something >to hold to feel to last >till rage turns and is >no more a comfort >in the absence >of love...
then i love the bittersweet culmination of the end. its not a disney-fied love for all ending, but something that can't help but force a smile on this reader.
excited to be back cause i know theres a lot more where this came from. can't wait to read more
> >"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then >nurture it wit more ink..." >ASIEM >"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran >(Be and it is) >" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in >love is fair" Stevie Wonder
12. "i guess this is a question so..." In response to Reply # 11 Sat Feb-17-07 05:33 PM by ASIEM
never wanting to take away from interpretation I will ask this. your name is freedomfighter what are you fighting for/against?
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder