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Babynoon
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Tue May-02-06 07:24 PM

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If all fails
We may never reliquish us
Remorsed in full
As the air mass inside a balloon be,
A pin's tip touched it lightly
Causing it to pop!!!!
Releasing what represented our breath
Not the lasssst breath, but all that was inhaled of we(us)
Breathe Again-Toni recalled
We've forgotton
Now we don't relate by any means
Not even is the blood color of the same
type A and B, but blue and orange
We cannot be saved
It's all right
Life has just begun.

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
Ohhhhhhh ...
May 02nd 2006
1
i like the way you ended it
May 03rd 2006
2
RE: i like the way you ended it
Jul 31st 2006
3
RE: i like the way you ended it
Jul 31st 2006
4
      RE: i like the way you ended it
Jul 31st 2006
5
           RE: i like the way you ended it
Apr 28th 2008
6
RE: i like the way (hi five)
Apr 29th 2008
7
      RE: i like the way (hi five)
Apr 29th 2008
8

PhotoSynthesis
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Tue May-02-06 07:32 PM

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1. "Ohhhhhhh ..."
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>As the air mass inside a balloon be,
>A pin's tip touched it lightly
>Causing it to pop!!!!
>Releasing what represented our breath
>Not the lasssst breath, but all that was inhaled of we(us)


I liked ^That^ --

Actually the whole thing was nice -- But the above lines moved like lungs -- (((Breathing Softly)))


Welcome Back Babynoon! -- *smiles*



A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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mindful
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Wed May-03-06 05:17 PM

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2. "i like the way you ended it"
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kinda calls curiosity to how it all may end up...

diggin the following lines:

We've forgotton
Now we don't relate by any means
Not even is the blood color of the same
type A and B, but blue and orange
We cannot be saved
It's all right
Life has just begun.

Peace~

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Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

http://msmind.blogspot.com

you're a daredevil, baby Švan hunt

no shit in 06.

  

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Babynoon
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Mon Jul-31-06 01:17 AM

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3. "RE: i like the way you ended it"
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wowee and it's still here.

  

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rubbersoulonice
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Mon Jul-31-06 03:36 AM

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4. "RE: i like the way you ended it"
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this rather did deserve the shameless upping. People ain't reading anything on this board.
------------------------------
Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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Babynoon
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Mon Jul-31-06 01:19 PM

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5. "RE: i like the way you ended it"
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>this rather did deserve the shameless upping. People ain't
>reading anything on this board.
>------------------------------
>Something like Eldridge
>Cleaver meets John Lennon


yup, there's to much for the eyes to see
So this "shameless upping" wasn't for a response
Or extra heads to check-in
I was just "bored" babe

later

  

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freedomfighter
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Mon Apr-28-08 06:35 PM

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6. "RE: i like the way you ended it"
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bump

Freeworld Order
Dangurus Mines

  

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Babynoon
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Tue Apr-29-08 06:30 PM

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7. "RE: i like the way (hi five)"
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it feels endless
this ride'
gas gonna runout'
Bush raising to 10$ a gallon'
we pumpin him up'
like Flava Flav
on tube rocks'
smokin us out of a room or house'

it's endless
they're gonna'
see the end
happily ever'
unended.


I've been glamorously bumped

(This account is inactive or no longer exists by user or moderators)




:hacked or spammed entry, do not responsed or send messages to this
account:: suspicious account or virus

  

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deep_thawtz
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Tue Apr-29-08 06:37 PM

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8. "RE: i like the way (hi five)"
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nice, thoughtful piece....really diggin it....

California's Catalyst,
Saginaw's Superhero,
Deep Thawtz

  

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