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56254, rhubarb_xrelated
Posted by Babynoon, Tue May-02-06 07:24 PM
If all fails
We may never reliquish us
Remorsed in full
As the air mass inside a balloon be,
A pin's tip touched it lightly
Causing it to pop!!!!
Releasing what represented our breath
Not the lasssst breath, but all that was inhaled of we(us)
Breathe Again-Toni recalled
We've forgotton
Now we don't relate by any means
Not even is the blood color of the same
type A and B, but blue and orange
We cannot be saved
It's all right
Life has just begun.
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56257, Ohhhhhhh ...
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Tue May-02-06 07:32 PM
>As the air mass inside a balloon be,
>A pin's tip touched it lightly
>Causing it to pop!!!!
>Releasing what represented our breath
>Not the lasssst breath, but all that was inhaled of we(us)
I liked ^That^ -- :)
Actually the whole thing was nice -- But the above lines moved like lungs -- (((Breathing Softly)))
Welcome Back Babynoon! -- *smiles*
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56297, i like the way you ended it
Posted by mindful, Wed May-03-06 05:17 PM
kinda calls curiosity to how it all may end up...
diggin the following lines:
We've forgotton
Now we don't relate by any means
Not even is the blood color of the same
type A and B, but blue and orange
We cannot be saved
It's all right
Life has just begun.
Peace~
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you're a daredevil, baby Švan hunt
no shit in 06.
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58978, RE: i like the way you ended it
Posted by Babynoon, Mon Jul-31-06 01:17 AM
wowee and it's still here.
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58980, RE: i like the way you ended it
Posted by rubbersoulonice, Mon Jul-31-06 03:36 AM
this rather did deserve the shameless upping. People ain't reading anything on this board.
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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon
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58996, RE: i like the way you ended it
Posted by Babynoon, Mon Jul-31-06 01:19 PM
>this rather did deserve the shameless upping. People ain't
>reading anything on this board.
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>Something like Eldridge
>Cleaver meets John Lennon
yup, there's to much for the eyes to see
So this "shameless upping" wasn't for a response
Or extra heads to check-in
I was just "bored" babe
later
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73878, RE: i like the way you ended it
Posted by freedomfighter, Mon Apr-28-08 06:35 PM
bump
Freeworld Order
Dangurus Mines
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73926, RE: i like the way (hi five)
Posted by Babynoon, Tue Apr-29-08 06:30 PM
it feels endless
this ride'
gas gonna runout'
Bush raising to 10$ a gallon'
we pumpin him up'
like Flava Flav
on tube rocks'
smokin us out of a room or house'
it's endless
they're gonna'
see the end
happily ever'
unended.
I've been glamorously bumped
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73927, RE: i like the way (hi five)
Posted by deep_thawtz, Tue Apr-29-08 06:37 PM
nice, thoughtful piece....really diggin it....
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