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mylife
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Thu Apr-06-06 01:53 PM

"bruised fruit (published)"


          

i eat the bruised fruit
because i know that sometimes
i am delicious beyond my scars

i am silent when angry
because i know that sometimes
i am capable of too much

i am fierce in my love
because i know that sometimes
softness is not nearly enough

i am frightened of myself
because i know that sometimes
i am unaware of the pull of my pain

i am like taffy left in the sun
because i know that sometimes
my vulnerability is my only asset

i am weakened by a touch
because i know that sometimes
passion's fire absolves my impurities

i am capable of UN-learning
because i know that sometimes
there is no truth to what i know

i am evolution in progress
because i know that sometimes
i dream of the me that held
fire in her hands
and walked upon the seas

i see all of my future selves
in the doubt in your eyes

i am more than the space between us

I'm convinced you're really just very lightskin with really "good" hair. © Iman Saadiqa

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Subject Author Message Date ID
Published?
Apr 06th 2006
1
RE: Published?
Aug 29th 2006
6
sometimes,
Apr 07th 2006
2
up nm
Apr 29th 2006
3
RE: bruised fruit (published)
Aug 29th 2006
4
RE: bruised fruit (published)
Aug 29th 2006
5
RE: bruised fruit (published)
Sep 01st 2006
7
fuckin beautiful
Oct 26th 2006
8

PhotoSynthesis
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Thu Apr-06-06 07:58 PM

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1. "Published?"
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*Props*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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freedomfighter
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Tue Aug-29-06 03:55 PM

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dam where you been missing you missing me lol ha ha

and i truely enjoyed your work of art peace

Freeworld Order
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mindful
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Fri Apr-07-06 09:25 PM

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i wish i were the thoughts in your head, just to see how we'll come out on paper...

i am evolution in progress
because i know that sometimes
i dream of the me that held
fire in her hands
and walked upon the seas

i see all of my future selves
in the doubt in your eyes

i am more than the space between us

especially for the lines above. Peace~

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Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

http://msmind.blogspot.com

i tell myself i'm strong
enough to go 12 rounds with
bad news and come out on top...

no shit in 06.

  

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mindful
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Sat Apr-29-06 07:53 PM

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Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

http://msmind.blogspot.com

you're a daredevil, baby ©van hunt

no shit in 06.

  

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ASIEM
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Tue Aug-29-06 02:06 PM

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4. "RE: bruised fruit (published)"
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sometimes we pass over "bruised fruit" not knowing how really great it is to partake of...
thanks for reminding me in an ever so eloquent manner

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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Mahogany5952
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Tue Aug-29-06 03:51 PM

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5. "RE: bruised fruit (published)"
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This is beautiful. No flowery words to use to share how I feel and am affected by this piece. It deserves clarity and simplicity. So I say it again: THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. My personal favorites:

*I am taffy left in the sun
*I am evolution in progress

The mind goes in so many different directions, to so many different places from those 2 lines. Really amazing.

Thanks,
~M5952

"There are two ways of meeting difficulties. You alter the difficulties or you alter yourself to meet them." ~Phyllis Bottome

  

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invisible ink
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Fri Sep-01-06 09:17 PM

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7. "RE: bruised fruit (published)"
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this didn't have a bruise in it ....miss k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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ChangThang
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Thu Oct-26-06 11:22 AM

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these are the type of gems that let me know what I'm feeling while I was unaware of feeling it

  

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