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55081, bruised fruit (published) Posted by , Thu Apr-06-06 01:53 PM
i eat the bruised fruit because i know that sometimes i am delicious beyond my scars
i am silent when angry because i know that sometimes i am capable of too much
i am fierce in my love because i know that sometimes softness is not nearly enough
i am frightened of myself because i know that sometimes i am unaware of the pull of my pain
i am like taffy left in the sun because i know that sometimes my vulnerability is my only asset
i am weakened by a touch because i know that sometimes passion's fire absolves my impurities
i am capable of UN-learning because i know that sometimes there is no truth to what i know
i am evolution in progress because i know that sometimes i dream of the me that held fire in her hands and walked upon the seas
i see all of my future selves in the doubt in your eyes
i am more than the space between us
I'm convinced you're really just very lightskin with really "good" hair. © Iman Saadiqa
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55107, Published? Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Thu Apr-06-06 07:58 PM
*Props*
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59937, RE: Published? Posted by freedomfighter, Tue Aug-29-06 03:55 PM
dam where you been missing you missing me lol ha ha
and i truely enjoyed your work of art peace
Freeworld Order Dangurus Mines
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55152, sometimes, Posted by mindful, Fri Apr-07-06 09:25 PM
i wish i were the thoughts in your head, just to see how we'll come out on paper...
i am evolution in progress because i know that sometimes i dream of the me that held fire in her hands and walked upon the seas
i see all of my future selves in the doubt in your eyes
i am more than the space between us
especially for the lines above. Peace~
------------------------ Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book http://www.lulu.com/content/132318
http://msmind.blogspot.com
i tell myself i'm strong enough to go 12 rounds with bad news and come out on top...
no shit in 06.
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56104, up nm Posted by mindful, Sat Apr-29-06 07:53 PM
------------------------ Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book http://www.lulu.com/content/132318
http://msmind.blogspot.com
you're a daredevil, baby ©van hunt
no shit in 06.
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59932, RE: bruised fruit (published) Posted by ASIEM, Tue Aug-29-06 02:06 PM
sometimes we pass over "bruised fruit" not knowing how really great it is to partake of... thanks for reminding me in an ever so eloquent manner
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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59936, RE: bruised fruit (published) Posted by Mahogany5952, Tue Aug-29-06 03:51 PM
This is beautiful. No flowery words to use to share how I feel and am affected by this piece. It deserves clarity and simplicity. So I say it again: THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. My personal favorites:
*I am taffy left in the sun *I am evolution in progress
The mind goes in so many different directions, to so many different places from those 2 lines. Really amazing.
Thanks, ~M5952
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60044, RE: bruised fruit (published) Posted by invisible ink, Fri Sep-01-06 09:17 PM
this didn't have a bruise in it :)....miss k
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61464, fuckin beautiful Posted by ChangThang, Thu Oct-26-06 11:22 AM
these are the type of gems that let me know what I'm feeling while I was unaware of feeling it
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