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3rd i
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"Suicide"


  

          

lightening offers glimpes into darkened rooms
souless eyes black as hungry nightfalls
devouring all

my arms battlescars
constantly trailing red blood
my blood has become an aquired taste

banshee howls swell from my throat
YOU COULD NEVER KNOW PAIN
i have maliciously fucked despair
LET ME SHOW U DEATH

i die a myriad of times over and over
rotten in shallow graves
my stink fills and crinkles noses

i am overflowing with sorrow
i am called 4th sister
The lost Fury

my mouth poison and cracked
the gorgons entwined in my locks
hiss and spit

Mistress of the apocolypse
i am the spear that wounded Christ
to earth, to earth, i am cast

IF U DARE
look into my eyes
see your own Destruction














i simply want to be the love song dangling from her lips-(c) Saul Williams

Jazzy since '75..


Got aim: Sistawitafro
Got Msn: Jazzybelle75







www.myspace.com/3rd_i

3rd i: so u gonna be my child's god parent
Dawgeatah: i already have 3
3rd i: yeah but do u have a black one..like pokemon gotta catch them all.

i am a self-mutilator
of the worst kind...
(c)MyLife

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
WHOA.....
Mar 24th 2002
1
up
Mar 27th 2002
2
you are too much
Mar 27th 2002
3
damn....
Mar 27th 2002
4
......Can I get your autograph??:D
Mar 28th 2002
5
      wow i didn't know i could impact people
Mar 28th 2002
6
see your own destruction
Mar 28th 2002
7
wow,
Mar 28th 2002
8
RE: Suicide
Mar 28th 2002
9
get down on your knees and pray for stregnth
Apr 04th 2002
10
RE: Suicide
Apr 04th 2002
11
yeh...yo' sht is scary nikki
Apr 04th 2002
12
RE: Suicide
Apr 04th 2002
13
i hate this piece was pushed up
Apr 04th 2002
14

Phenomenality
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Sun Mar-24-02 12:03 AM

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1. "WHOA....."
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*chills* Man... that.. I remember times, although long long ago.. I had some moments. This was hard to read.. You really brought it to life.. Intense.

Breath E.Z.

~Zhana V~

BlackPlanet ID: Phenomenality

~ Be humble, for you are made of the earth... Be noble, for you are made of the stars.. ~
~ Give me a Naked Soul & a Mature Mind ~

...

Vee is I and I am She

...

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sistawitafro
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Wed Mar-27-02 09:06 AM

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2. "up"
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aint it cute!!!!!

*\ /*
(0.o)
(")(")

i'm sorry i need people to tell me i'm cool i'm just that way aren't you???-(c) Beau sia

ARE U PUSSY?

P-URPOSELY
U-NDETERMINED
S-OCIALLY
S-TAGNANT
Y-OUTH

Now i'll ask u again are u pussy?

coma, la bebida, es alegre por viernes que moriré

¿Era U jamás mi amigo? llora no para ahora seré feliz?

  

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Kayper
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Wed Mar-27-02 12:02 PM

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3. "you are too much"
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the images that you can paint and the way you phrase your lines is amazing to me...

i want to be like you when i grow up....


kayper
kayper@kayper.com
drew@okayplayer.com

www.kayper.com (one day)

We walk the path forever. Why not walk
it together? - Me

"sometimes I write
with my eyes closed
so my heart
can recieve dictation" - LexM

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I'm a Capricorn, so don't take me personal, but take me serious.

Why do we call each other nigger? - Me

If you are going through hell, keep going" - Winston Churchill

Just my $.02...you can keep
the change.

Ple

  

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ashyknees
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Wed Mar-27-02 12:59 PM

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4. "damn...."
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that was real good.
really.
like real visual.

the part about your blood being
an aquired taste was tight.

just that this part...

>Mistress of the apocolypse
>i am the spear that wounded
>Christ
>to earth, to earth, i am
>cast

scared the hell out of me.
im grabbing my rosary beads
as i write this.


______________________

conan,

even the hand im using to write this is fake.

- cher



aim: ashyknees3001

______________________________


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MeDiNaStaR
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Thu Mar-28-02 12:22 AM

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5. "......Can I get your autograph??:D"
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Or do you want to give me a little bit of your powers...

IF U DARE
look into my eyes
see your own Destruction

Guilty thats what I felt after I read your piece without a reason now thats scurry
-------------sigh-----------
Love to love the lovable

I seek intergration of negroes with black people- Haki R.Madhubti

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hate keeps my teeth white

  

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sistawitafro
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Thu Mar-28-02 05:08 AM

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6. "wow i didn't know i could impact people"
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like that!!! i was feeling all evil...but thanks for the love!

coma, la bebida, es alegre por viernes que moriré

¿Era U jamás mi amigo? llora no para ahora seré feliz?

  

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mindful
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Thu Mar-28-02 08:05 AM

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7. "see your own destruction"
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damn to the line in the subject area......

i have maliciously fucked despair
LET ME SHOW U DEATH

could it get any deeper? Damn 3rd... I believe you tested the fatal waters with this one, and not only did you overcome them... you made a sister visualize every line... Peace~
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happiness looks good on
you. ©semlohspeaks
Fa-(inspiring)-him

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ICON
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Thu Mar-28-02 11:08 AM

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8. "wow,"
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i'm moved.


***I'm moving to Atlanta Saturday!***

  

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Peter_Parker
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Thu Mar-28-02 11:19 AM

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9. "RE: Suicide"
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i am overflowing with sorrow
i am called 4th sister
The lost Fury

my mouth poison and cracked
the gorgons entwined in my locks
hiss and spit

Mistress of the apocolypse
i am the spear that wounded Christ

-Dope-


--Madness is the prelude to Genius--

(or is that backwards) --anyway--

Peter Parker is
the amaZing spiderman

(and a whole bunch a other ish that tries to defy gravity)

Please bless this poetry board
I moderate over at THH
http://ub3.homepagetools.com/thhfreestyle/
--It needs help--

Peter Parker is
the amaZing spiderman

  

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QweenFiyah
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Thu Apr-04-02 06:06 AM

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10. "get down on your knees and pray for stregnth"
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The human mind is not capable of grasping the Universe. We are like a little child entering a huge library. The walls are covered to the ceiling with books in many different tongues.
The child knows that someone must have written these books. It does not know who or how. It does not understand the languages in which they are written. But the child notes a definite plan in the arrangement of the books; a mysterious order it does not comprehend, but only dimly suspects.
-Albert Einstein



  

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chacho
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Thu Apr-04-02 06:12 AM

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11. "RE: Suicide"
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massive energy.

i'm left empty after reading this...

-peace-
____________________________________________________________

"I Slang Rocks, But Palestinian Style..." - Boots Riley
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RatpackSlim
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Thu Apr-04-02 07:41 AM

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12. "yeh...yo' sht is scary nikki"
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now i gotta sleep with the light on again

dammit

-------
just breathe
thass what i keep tellin myself
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my AIM name is RatpackSlim
my e-mail is ratpackslim@hotmail.com
thass my MSN addy too
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Domepome Poets--the Dopest Poetic Prophets...

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"You Sensitive Bastard", Rob Sturma's latest book of poems, is available directly from the author. It's a pretty book with a real ISBN number and everything.

www.myspace.com/robsturma

  

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PG
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Thu Apr-04-02 08:30 AM

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13. "RE: Suicide"
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Damd glad you in my corner babe.... you fierce fucker you!!!!!!!!

  

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sistawitafro
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Thu Apr-04-02 08:35 AM

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14. "i hate this piece was pushed up"
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:(




yeah he's a pretty boy...a pretty ugly boy!-Dodomafioso

coma, la bebida, es alegre por viernes que moriré

¿Era U jamás mi amigo? llora no para ahora seré feliz?

  

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