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Topic subjectSuicide
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8920, Suicide
Posted by 3rd i, Sat Mar-23-02 11:24 AM
lightening offers glimpes into darkened rooms
souless eyes black as hungry nightfalls
devouring all

my arms battlescars
constantly trailing red blood
my blood has become an aquired taste

banshee howls swell from my throat
YOU COULD NEVER KNOW PAIN
i have maliciously fucked despair
LET ME SHOW U DEATH

i die a myriad of times over and over
rotten in shallow graves
my stink fills and crinkles noses

i am overflowing with sorrow
i am called 4th sister
The lost Fury

my mouth poison and cracked
the gorgons entwined in my locks
hiss and spit

Mistress of the apocolypse
i am the spear that wounded Christ
to earth, to earth, i am cast

IF U DARE
look into my eyes
see your own Destruction














i simply want to be the love song dangling from her lips-(c) Saul Williams

Jazzy since '75..


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Got Msn: Jazzybelle75







8921, WHOA.....
Posted by Phenomenality, Sun Mar-24-02 12:03 AM
*chills* Man... that.. I remember times, although long long ago.. I had some moments. This was hard to read.. You really brought it to life.. Intense.

Breath E.Z.

~Zhana V~

BlackPlanet ID: Phenomenality

~ Be humble, for you are made of the earth... Be noble, for you are made of the stars.. ~
~ Give me a Naked Soul & a Mature Mind ~
8922, up
Posted by sistawitafro, Wed Mar-27-02 09:06 AM
aint it cute!!!!!

*\ /*
(0.o)
(")(")

i'm sorry i need people to tell me i'm cool i'm just that way aren't you???-(c) Beau sia

ARE U PUSSY?

P-URPOSELY
U-NDETERMINED
S-OCIALLY
S-TAGNANT
Y-OUTH

Now i'll ask u again are u pussy?

8923, you are too much
Posted by Kayper, Wed Mar-27-02 12:02 PM
the images that you can paint and the way you phrase your lines is amazing to me...

i want to be like you when i grow up....


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it together? - Me

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so my heart
can recieve dictation" - LexM
8924, damn....
Posted by ashyknees, Wed Mar-27-02 12:59 PM
that was real good.
really.
like real visual.

the part about your blood being
an aquired taste was tight.

just that this part...

>Mistress of the apocolypse
>i am the spear that wounded
>Christ
>to earth, to earth, i am
>cast

scared the hell out of me.
im grabbing my rosary beads
as i write this.

:-)
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conan,

even the hand im using to write this is fake.

- cher



aim: ashyknees3001

8925, ......Can I get your autograph??:D
Posted by MeDiNaStaR, Thu Mar-28-02 12:22 AM
Or do you want to give me a little bit of your powers...

IF U DARE
look into my eyes
see your own Destruction

Guilty thats what I felt after I read your piece without a reason now thats scurry
-------------sigh-----------
Love to love the lovable

I seek intergration of negroes with black people- Haki R.Madhubti
8926, wow i didn't know i could impact people
Posted by sistawitafro, Thu Mar-28-02 05:08 AM
like that!!! i was feeling all evil...but thanks for the love!
8927, see your own destruction
Posted by mindful, Thu Mar-28-02 08:05 AM
damn to the line in the subject area......

i have maliciously fucked despair
LET ME SHOW U DEATH

could it get any deeper? Damn 3rd... I believe you tested the fatal waters with this one, and not only did you overcome them... you made a sister visualize every line... Peace~
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8928, wow,
Posted by ICON, Thu Mar-28-02 11:08 AM
i'm moved.


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8929, RE: Suicide
Posted by Peter_Parker, Thu Mar-28-02 11:19 AM
i am overflowing with sorrow
i am called 4th sister
The lost Fury

my mouth poison and cracked
the gorgons entwined in my locks
hiss and spit

Mistress of the apocolypse
i am the spear that wounded Christ

-Dope-


--Madness is the prelude to Genius--

(or is that backwards) --anyway--

Peter Parker is
the amaZing spiderman

(and a whole bunch a other ish that tries to defy gravity)

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8930, get down on your knees and pray for stregnth
Posted by QweenFiyah, Thu Apr-04-02 06:06 AM














!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The human mind is not capable of grasping the Universe. We are like a little child entering a huge library. The walls are covered to the ceiling with books in many different tongues.
The child knows that someone must have written these books. It does not know who or how. It does not understand the languages in which they are written. But the child notes a definite plan in the arrangement of the books; a mysterious order it does not comprehend, but only dimly suspects.
-Albert Einstein



8931, RE: Suicide
Posted by chacho, Thu Apr-04-02 06:12 AM
massive energy.

i'm left empty after reading this...

-peace-
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8932, yeh...yo' sht is scary nikki
Posted by RatpackSlim, Thu Apr-04-02 07:41 AM
now i gotta sleep with the light on again

dammit

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just breathe
thass what i keep tellin myself
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my e-mail is ratpackslim@hotmail.com
thass my MSN addy too
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8933, RE: Suicide
Posted by PG, Thu Apr-04-02 08:30 AM
Damd glad you in my corner babe.... you fierce fucker you!!!!!!!!
8934, i hate this piece was pushed up
Posted by sistawitafro, Thu Apr-04-02 08:35 AM
:(




yeah he's a pretty boy...a pretty ugly boy!-Dodomafioso