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8920, Suicide Posted by 3rd i, Sat Mar-23-02 11:24 AM
lightening offers glimpes into darkened rooms souless eyes black as hungry nightfalls devouring all
my arms battlescars constantly trailing red blood my blood has become an aquired taste
banshee howls swell from my throat YOU COULD NEVER KNOW PAIN i have maliciously fucked despair LET ME SHOW U DEATH
i die a myriad of times over and over rotten in shallow graves my stink fills and crinkles noses
i am overflowing with sorrow i am called 4th sister The lost Fury
my mouth poison and cracked the gorgons entwined in my locks hiss and spit
Mistress of the apocolypse i am the spear that wounded Christ to earth, to earth, i am cast
IF U DARE look into my eyes see your own Destruction
i simply want to be the love song dangling from her lips-(c) Saul Williams
Jazzy since '75..
Got aim: Sistawitafro Got Msn: Jazzybelle75
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8921, WHOA..... Posted by Phenomenality, Sun Mar-24-02 12:03 AM
*chills* Man... that.. I remember times, although long long ago.. I had some moments. This was hard to read.. You really brought it to life.. Intense.
Breath E.Z.
~Zhana V~
BlackPlanet ID: Phenomenality
~ Be humble, for you are made of the earth... Be noble, for you are made of the stars.. ~ ~ Give me a Naked Soul & a Mature Mind ~
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8922, up Posted by sistawitafro, Wed Mar-27-02 09:06 AM
aint it cute!!!!!
*\ /* (0.o) (")(")
i'm sorry i need people to tell me i'm cool i'm just that way aren't you???-(c) Beau sia ARE U PUSSY?
P-URPOSELY U-NDETERMINED S-OCIALLY S-TAGNANT Y-OUTH
Now i'll ask u again are u pussy?
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8923, you are too much Posted by Kayper, Wed Mar-27-02 12:02 PM
the images that you can paint and the way you phrase your lines is amazing to me...
i want to be like you when i grow up....
kayper kayper@kayper.com drew@okayplayer.com
www.kayper.com (one day)
We walk the path forever. Why not walk it together? - Me
"sometimes I write with my eyes closed so my heart can recieve dictation" - LexM
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8924, damn.... Posted by ashyknees, Wed Mar-27-02 12:59 PM
that was real good. really. like real visual.
the part about your blood being an aquired taste was tight.
just that this part...
>Mistress of the apocolypse >i am the spear that wounded >Christ >to earth, to earth, i am >cast
scared the hell out of me. im grabbing my rosary beads as i write this.
:-) ______________________
conan,
even the hand im using to write this is fake. - cher
aim: ashyknees3001
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8925, ......Can I get your autograph??:D Posted by MeDiNaStaR, Thu Mar-28-02 12:22 AM
Or do you want to give me a little bit of your powers...
IF U DARE look into my eyes see your own Destruction
Guilty thats what I felt after I read your piece without a reason now thats scurry -------------sigh----------- Love to love the lovable
I seek intergration of negroes with black people- Haki R.Madhubti
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8926, wow i didn't know i could impact people Posted by sistawitafro, Thu Mar-28-02 05:08 AM
like that!!! i was feeling all evil...but thanks for the love!
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8927, see your own destruction Posted by mindful, Thu Mar-28-02 08:05 AM
damn to the line in the subject area......
i have maliciously fucked despair LET ME SHOW U DEATH
could it get any deeper? Damn 3rd... I believe you tested the fatal waters with this one, and not only did you overcome them... you made a sister visualize every line... Peace~ ___________________________________
you're GroWing ©paperdollpoet
happiness looks good on you. ©semlohspeaks Fa-(inspiring)-him
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8928, wow, Posted by ICON, Thu Mar-28-02 11:08 AM
i'm moved.
***I'm moving to Atlanta Saturday!***
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8929, RE: Suicide Posted by Peter_Parker, Thu Mar-28-02 11:19 AM
i am overflowing with sorrow i am called 4th sister The lost Fury
my mouth poison and cracked the gorgons entwined in my locks hiss and spit
Mistress of the apocolypse i am the spear that wounded Christ
-Dope-
--Madness is the prelude to Genius--
(or is that backwards) --anyway--
Peter Parker is the amaZing spiderman
(and a whole bunch a other ish that tries to defy gravity)
Please bless this poetry board I moderate over at THH http://ub3.homepagetools.com/thhfreestyle/ --It needs help--
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8930, get down on your knees and pray for stregnth Posted by QweenFiyah, Thu Apr-04-02 06:06 AM
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The human mind is not capable of grasping the Universe. We are like a little child entering a huge library. The walls are covered to the ceiling with books in many different tongues. The child knows that someone must have written these books. It does not know who or how. It does not understand the languages in which they are written. But the child notes a definite plan in the arrangement of the books; a mysterious order it does not comprehend, but only dimly suspects. -Albert Einstein
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8931, RE: Suicide Posted by chacho, Thu Apr-04-02 06:12 AM
massive energy.
i'm left empty after reading this...
-peace- ____________________________________________________________
"I Slang Rocks, But Palestinian Style..." - Boots Riley ____________________________________________________________
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8932, yeh...yo' sht is scary nikki Posted by RatpackSlim, Thu Apr-04-02 07:41 AM
now i gotta sleep with the light on again
dammit
------- just breathe thass what i keep tellin myself ------- my AIM name is RatpackSlim my e-mail is ratpackslim@hotmail.com thass my MSN addy too --------- Domepome Poets--the Dopest Poetic Prophets...
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8933, RE: Suicide Posted by PG, Thu Apr-04-02 08:30 AM
Damd glad you in my corner babe.... you fierce fucker you!!!!!!!!
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8934, i hate this piece was pushed up Posted by sistawitafro, Thu Apr-04-02 08:35 AM
:(
yeah he's a pretty boy...a pretty ugly boy!-Dodomafioso
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