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morpheme
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Tue Aug-16-05 04:08 AM

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08august2005




i want to do
somethin
like
cross the street to where the too lil girls are
humpin
& grindin
& poppin it
& show them how to slow the rolls of their hips
& learn them of africa
& breakbeats
& promise to return w/more if they promise to do
some type of self-affirmin thing until then
& how they can tell stories like mikaela
but
i do not know hula

i want to cross the street to where
a lil boy has fallen
frum heat stroke
& command wet towels
& where's his mother???
& cradle his lil hot body
til someone goes for his grandma
who is raisin him
but
what if they argue about whose linen & he dies???

i want to cross & show u
separate & show u
what i can do
a detroit madonna
only she doesn't really-
no one has ever really
been able to tell me what she does-
& i really want to do sumthin
to really show u

what i can do

i don't wanna do no cerebral thang
like
read poetry
in some spot
where ppl can afford to pay to feign attention
to works better found in libraries
if they read
& not just wrote

but

i do want u to watch me watch jeopardy

{because i am smart
i'm as brilliant as a most brilliant 8th grader
durin teen week
& i'm always smarter than the celebrities
& i success in final jeopardy more than often
i really want u to know i'm smart, u can see}

but

u know i'm smart

& i write

i just know how to do so MANY thangs
kitchen
cleanin
babies
elderly
anticeptic
funny
shelter
best gift EVER
thangs

baby

w/my prettily set tables
w/my confrontin white folks w/good diction & direct eye contact


i just want u to see what i can do







-k l moore

  

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its sooooooo good to......
Aug 16th 2005
1
RE: 08august2005
Aug 16th 2005
2
*smiles*
Aug 16th 2005
3
08august2005
Aug 17th 2005
4
happy belated
Aug 17th 2005
5
& urs is soon comin...
Aug 17th 2005
6

KnowOne
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Tue Aug-16-05 07:42 AM

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1. "its sooooooo good to......"
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read from you again.

Keep Flowin' Sis'........

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ASIEM
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Tue Aug-16-05 12:36 PM

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i like the format and the ideas it reads like short stories real images form while reading
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
checkout these sites
http://4luvofpoetry.com
www.poetology.com

  

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the perfect mistake
Member since Dec 19th 2004
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Tue Aug-16-05 05:17 PM

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3. "*smiles*"
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i saw look forward to you posting... why? for this...


i want to cross & show u
separate & show u
what i can do
a detroit madonna
only she doesn't really-
no one has ever really
been able to tell me what she does-
& i really want to do sumthin
to really show u

what i can do

i don't wanna do no cerebral thang
like
read poetry
in some spot
where ppl can afford to pay to feign attention
to works better found in libraries
if they read
& not just wrote

but

i do want u to watch me watch jeopardy

*nods*




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Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

http://msmind.blogspot.com

you've been resurrected, tre.

  

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Youn Maze
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Wed Aug-17-05 09:02 AM

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4. "08august2005"
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Wed Aug-17-05 09:03 AM by Youn Maze

          

on my berfday too ... this was splended ...i mean you are reallly breathing a breath of fresh air here .... your poem epitomizes the the everyday life of a woman i would guess and gives us a look from the inside out ....i really really enjoyed every minute of this .....

....COP SOME WRITTENS!!!

  

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rgv
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Wed Aug-17-05 09:44 AM

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detroit madonna

i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

  

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morpheme
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Wed Aug-17-05 11:36 PM

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6. "& urs is soon comin..."
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u harlem heiress

thanks

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