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PhotoSynthesis
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"Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --"


          

He called me "ma"
As I smiled that *knowing* smile
"Ma" -- His definition from a Japanese perspective
Means: A ~fullness of space~
Best described as a metaphor
... The area between stepping stones
.... The gap between musical notes
..... A space revealed when a door is slid open
...... Part of the rightful order of things
You see, I never knew ...
Because ma is such a cliche' way of sayin' -- mami'
A complement to papi'
And mami' can mean honey, sweetie, baby, cutie, pretty one, etc.
But when he broke it down for me
With a glass of warm saki & a book of Japanese Love poems
I felt a deep sensation of security
... He read:
"I shall hide myself
within the moon of the spring night
after I have dared to reveal
my love to you
... And I read to him:
Making love with you
Is like drinking sea water
The more I drink
The thirstier I become,
Until nothing can slake my thirst
But to drink the entire sea
~Listening to him read to me~
My soul soared thru the rooftop
I couldn't stop
*Smiling*
Mentally profiling
As I realized the cohesiveness of our "ship"
Long~Time Friend~SHIP
Sweet Relation~SHIP
That cool dip in a pool of Partner~SHIP
Cuz love is friendship that's caught fire
This kinda love goes far beyond just lust & desire
It's quiet understanding, mutual confidence,
Sharing & forgiving
Living with loyaltly through the good and bad
Settling for less than perfection
While making allowances for human weakness
I speak this with assurance -- *knowing* while showing
I'm content with the present as I hope for the future
But I can't brood over the past
Pie in the sky "HAPPY DAYS" don't usually last
It's the day-in and day-out chronicles
Of irritations, problems, compromises, disappointments
Big victories and working toward common goals
That keeps torrential waters from capsizing over rolls
And like two lost souls sailing on fate's ship
We hold on for dear life
Prayin' this Loveboat don't tip
~OVER~

*chuckles*


Yeah, I know ... I fell off at da end! -- ;^\

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --
Feb 25th 2005
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Thanx Ms. Vixen -- ;^)
Feb 26th 2005
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RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --
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RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --
Feb 25th 2005
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*LoL* @ blak_yukon
Feb 25th 2005
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RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --
Feb 25th 2005
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RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --
Feb 25th 2005
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InGenious !
Feb 25th 2005
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      Bull-ish...
Feb 25th 2005
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i think u did your best here:
Feb 25th 2005
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cosign...
Feb 26th 2005
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basically
Feb 27th 2005
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Ummmmm ...
Feb 27th 2005
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RE: i think u did your best here:
Sep 01st 2005
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For me...
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You're So Right, Pheno ...
Feb 27th 2005
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RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --
Feb 27th 2005
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Whuzzzup Huey!
Feb 27th 2005
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RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --
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i dont think ive ever read much
Feb 27th 2005
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RE: i dont think ive ever read much
Feb 28th 2005
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RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --
Feb 28th 2005
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Did You?
Feb 28th 2005
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RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --
Jul 21st 2005
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How the fuck...
Jul 21st 2005
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It's True ...
Jul 22nd 2005
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RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --
Aug 19th 2005
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Qufee?
Aug 31st 2005
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sheer and utter....
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Archive this ONE
Sep 01st 2005
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I second that...
Sep 01st 2005
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      My "Official" Fan Club .. *chuckles*
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Intrepid Vixen
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1. "RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --"
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No, I didn't think that it fell off at the end at all. Quite the opposite. I felt that although the waters won't always be calm, you and your love will be able to navigate those seas! I liked this a lot Ms. Photo. But this especially:

With a glass of warm saki & a book of Japanese Love poems
I felt a deep sensation of security
... He read:
"I shall hide myself
within the moon of the spring night
after I have dared to reveal
my love to you
... And I read to him:
Making love with you
Is like drinking sea water
The more I drink
The thirstier I become,
Until nothing can slake my thirst
But to drink the entire sea-->>So Beautiful and I wish that it was me!!!!!
~Listening to him read to me~

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My feelings or emotions or anything at all will reverberate throughout the halls of a poem."
~KSB~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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12. "Thanx Ms. Vixen -- ;^)"
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I just spit out some words on this today -- (Tripped ova my tongue in a coupla spots, but my mic bugged out on me, so I couldn't RE~DO it) -- *shruggs*

Boat Rockkin' (((AUDIO)))

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesismusic.htm

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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2. "RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --"
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so yall were at a benihana spot catching feelings,huh...

nice,
blk


you will like vicversus...


This for yall keeping them bills payed / gas in the car with whatevers left / keeping something on the plate.(c) i said it.


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3. "RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --"
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That was really fresh yo. I'm definatley feeling your style. Keep writing.

"There are two educations. One should teach us how to make a living and the other how to live." - John Adams

“We only do well the things we like doing”. Colette

“Man is so made that whenever anything fires his soul, impossibilities vanish”. Jean de

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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8. "*LoL* @ blak_yukon"
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Youze a trip blak! -- *chuckles*


Catchin' feelings at Benihana's ---- Nahhhh ... It was more like the "Tokoyo Steakhouse" -- ;^)

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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4. "RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --"
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Oh my *@#!#$ word. that is that hot shit! has every thing... emotion, word play, imagery, knowledge, honesty... i can keep on going too.... PUBLISH PLEASE PUBLISH YOUR STUFF!


BXC
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"With peace and love in my lungs,
I hold my breath until the Poet returns."

--Boxcarboys

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"With peace and love in my lungs,
I hold my breath until the Poet returns."

  

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5. "RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --"
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I dunno why but after reading this poem the song, 'Ordinary People' kept popping into my head. It just reminds me of that song, being comfy with the one you love. Knowing love isn't just about kisses, hugs etc but about understanding, patience, compromise, affection, friendship.

I liked the way you used ~SHIP.

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6. "InGenious !"
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Fri Feb-25-05 12:32 PM

          

The best I could do is "possibly" make an AUDIO outta this -- *chuckles*

But publication of my work would take a hella lotta spit & polish, nahmean?


Thanx for the love tho, InGenious -- (((Much Appreciated)))

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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7. "Bull-ish..."
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Bull-ish!

PUBLISH!
PUBLISH!
PUBLISH!

YEEEEEEEEAH!

...But wait...
Do you hear something? ((Chooo Chooo))

ToBeContinued;
------------------------------
Be on the look out for theBoxCarBoys...(InGeniousPoet/The_Epiphany/Feel1ONE/Focus23)


Peace and Love are still in my lungs, never stale.
I still wait for the Poet to return so that I may Exhale.
---Boxcarboys

AND LIKE A FAT GIRL IN DODGE BALL...I'M OUT!!!!!

Steam-Powered Spit-Sessions Re-write the Bright-Lessons of Life each day with Nice-Blessin's...Word/Life/Write

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ToBeContinued;
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Check out theBoxCarBoys...

  

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9. "i think u did your best here:"
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Making love with you
Is like drinking sea water
The more I drink
The thirstier I become,
Until nothing can slake my thirst
But to drink the entire sea

and u tried to play catch up with the rest following those lines... i never really cared for "ma," but this is rather delightful insight to the phrase. peace~







================





On
the corner of hope
and nowhere

i stood. ©revion

  

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10. "cosign..."
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and this flowed very well, nice job miss photo, keep doin your thing

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16. "basically"
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>Making love with you
>Is like drinking sea water
>The more I drink
>The thirstier I become,
>Until nothing can slake my thirst
>But to drink the entire sea

i stopped
re-read
smiled
caught a couple of flashbacks
etc.

i dont know about 'playing catch up'
but i think that
those particular words
positioned in that way
would/will continuously outshine any
other group of words you or anybody else
put around them


hill over a hill.

_____________________________________

The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

  

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17. "Ummmmm ..."
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U NEED to stick around buddy! -- *smiles*


*Photo grabs handcuffs and hooks blaksilence to da board*


Don't start smilin' -- This ain't fa' no kinky stuff! -- *chuckles*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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32. "RE: i think u did your best here:"
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I agree...that was the point that i was like...ooooooooooo...i wish someone would say that to me...miss k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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11. "For me..."
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its ironic that u felt u fell off at the end.. but for me, this is where TRUTH spewed out...

>It's the day-in and day-out chronicles
>Of irritations, problems, compromises, disappointments
>Big victories and working toward common goals
>That keeps torrential waters from capsizing over rolls
>And like two lost souls sailing on fate's ship
>We hold on for dear life
>Prayin' this Loveboat don't tip
>~OVER~
>------>lady.. this is simply, fundamentally... True. Relationships are a piece of cake when all is well.. anyone can have fun.. what truly defines a relationship *is* the struggles.. it *is* the cycles.. it *is* the ~problems~ and our *actions and reactions* to those.. that truly define our relationships. Thank you so much for that look...

coming into it with that in hand.. brings an inherent longevity with it..

simply beautiful.

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13. "You're So Right, Pheno ..."
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"Relationships are a piece of cake when all is well.. anyone can have fun.. what truly defines a relationship *is* the struggles.. it *is* the cycles.. it *is* the ~problems~ and our *actions and reactions* to those.. that truly define our relationships"

But as far as the very end of this joint was concerned -- I *knew* I was forcing my rhymescheme to hurry up and end the pCe, nahmean?

So I felt like I "fell off" as far as closure was concerned -- ;^(



A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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14. "RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --"
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choice of descriptive vocab is very detailed and the poem is
quite fitting . . allow me to introduce mYself, I'm Huey Newton i'll be posting my thoughts and I look forward to reading all the others on this site, ha-ha . . since there's so many . .
one-love y'all!!

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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15. "Whuzzzup Huey!"
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*smiles*

And welcome to OKP!

I dunno if you've already read the "Welcome Mat & Rules" or not -- But you're certainly off to a great start by steppin' on the board "CORRECTLY" -- By peeping & responding to others.

More than likely, those that you've taken the time to check out and respond to -- WILL BE THE FIRST TO RESPOND BACK TO YOU!

(I Know I Will) -- *yuuuup*

Take your time and get a feel for the board -- I'll be looking OUT for ya! -- *wink*

And thanx for the peep on my pCe! -- ;^) -- *Much Appreciated*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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18. "RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --"
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even tho it did seem to fizzle at the end...this is one of my favorites from u...i dunno, maybe its cause i just turned in my playa's card but this had a lovely vibe, and beautiful words, i like the format too...ima have to come back to this...me likey

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19. "i dont think ive ever read much"
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from you
or heard your audios
and tonite
this morning,
really,
i heard this w/ the little japanese beat
and u know...im back to having nothing to say
like im scratching the top of my head and thinking
and my face is like scrunched b/c im thinking hard
and it's 3:30 in the morning
i got my white grape juice
just got off the fone w/ my friend
feeling good w/ a hurting heart
waiting fot this storm to come
and wow...the audio just ended
and this is all ive said

i dont like for a nigga to call me ma
just one nigga and he traded that in for babygirl
and now he dont call me shit, so yeah

bedtime.

i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

  

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20. "RE: i dont think ive ever read much"
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Mon Feb-28-05 03:34 AM

          

rgv -- I'm just honored that you took the time to read & listen -- Sometimes that's all thatz really needed to make a persons' day! -- *smiles*

(((Thank You)))


>just got off the fone w/ my friend
>feeling good w/ a hurting heart
>waiting fot this storm to come

I hope your heart feels betta soon -- And I hope the storm comes & GOES quickly!


~Much Love & Peace of Mind~

edit: Ummmmm -- After reading the ^Above^ again, I'm not sure if it was YOU or your friend with the hurting heart -- But whoever it was, I hope it feels better soon -- (((Forreal Tho)))


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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21. "RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --"
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This was a beautiful, sentimental piece of work.... too many quotables to choose from.

It almost reads like a guideline for "being in love".

"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

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22. "Did You?"
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Did you HEAR my (((AUDIO))) where I was trippin' ova my tongue? -- *chuckles*

I *know* you read this -- But if you wanna "HEAR" it -- the link is ^UP^ under Intrepid's thread -- ;^)

Thanx for peepin', Chaotic -- *Much Appreciated*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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23. "RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --"
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Wed Jul-20-05 09:42 PM by PhotoSynthesis

          

The ONLY reason I'm ^UpPiN^ this is cuz I heard thru the grapevine that they MIGHT be trimmin' the board back down to 10 pages again! --

But you know how rumors are! -- *chuckles* -- (And I could be mistaken)


^UP^

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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24. "RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --"
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You've painted a beautiful picture once again

Like Luda said

"I might wanna take a flick flick flick..."...lol

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"My salvation is salivating"---Rass Kass

"Consider me fear because I shear ideas"--Kool G Rap

"Really dope needles are needed to inject this"--Kool G Rap

  

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bonitaapplebaum71481
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25. "How the fuck..."
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did I miss this good ish right here? You was doin it up right here meng!!! I like it a lots and is it true lady?? If so, ride that dude deep!!!


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Love at the lips was touch

As sweet as I could bear;

And once that seemed too much;

I lived on air - Robert Frost

  

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26. "It's True ..."
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>I like it a lots and is it true lady?? If so, ride that dude deep!!!



I've known dude for many, many years -- So he's my friend and confidant -- As well as the love of my life.

We have an unusual friendship/relationship -- But it's ALL GOOD -- (And I won't bother to explain) --


I be's riding tho! --




A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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27. "RE: Don't Rock Da Boat "Ma" --"
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how did i miss this . i take my qufee of to you sis this is genious i love this piece exceptional in every respect i claim no authority but u are definitely an exceptional writer...wowx
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
checkout these sites
http://4luvofpoetry.com
www.poetology.com

  

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28. "Qufee?"
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I was assuming it's a hat -- but I tried to "google" that word and all I found was something pertaining to Islamic Calligraphy -- -- Soooo -- Uhhhhhh -- Pardon my ignorance, but what's a qufee?

Oh!

Or maybe you were tippin' your Islamic Calligraphic Pen, huh? --

Thanx 4 the love, neva~the~less -- *smiles*




A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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29. "sheer and utter...."
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brilliance. i'm in tears, "ma". the thought of what u painted with ur words is still in my mind. and still is takin my breath away. gorgeous! write on, write on!

Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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30. "Archive this ONE"
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i am sending another vote for you don't know what happened to the last one. however this is just great writing 'pleeez ba leeve me' you are a genuine super star.
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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31. "I second that..."
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archive...


<===== ain't she cute as a button??

  

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33. "My "Official" Fan Club .. *chuckles*"
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(((Bonita & ASIEM)))

Just as long as U know -- I'm in "YOUR" fan club too! --

*Photo flaunts "bonitaapplebaum71481" & "ASIEM" buttons -- One on each side* --


Ms. Bonita -- That's a beautiful lil' girl in your Avatar -- Indeed! -- Cute as a button~ --


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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