No, I didn't think that it fell off at the end at all. Quite the opposite. I felt that although the waters won't always be calm, you and your love will be able to navigate those seas! I liked this a lot Ms. Photo. But this especially:

With a glass of warm saki & a book of Japanese Love poems
I felt a deep sensation of security
... He read:
"I shall hide myself
within the moon of the spring night
after I have dared to reveal
my love to you
... And I read to him:
Making love with you
Is like drinking sea water
The more I drink
The thirstier I become,
Until nothing can slake my thirst
But to drink the entire sea-->>So Beautiful and I wish that it was me!!!!!
~Listening to him read to me~

~*~
Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
canvassing
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
words
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My feelings or emotions or anything at all will reverberate throughout the halls of a poem."
~KSB~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley