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jayare214
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Thu Mar-24-05 05:37 PM

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"poets purpose"


          

let them gather
like a fearsome storm,
black wrath of scorn condensed
and poured fourth in form.

let them rain
and drench all that are dry
with the force of life
infused in words released to fly.

let them bathe
in transcendental thoughts
and sage wisdom
foreign to ears of villians
lost to materialism.

let them rise
beyond the confines
of any existence
and find god
in the absence of any religion

let them lead
by expanidng the imaginations of all
questioning love's fall
and heeding an artist's call.

my music group:
http://www.facebook.com/beataroundabush
http://www.lastfm.com/beataroundabush
http://www.reverbnation.com/beataroundabush
http://www.myspace.com/beataroundabush

My beats:
www.myspace.com/jayarejohnson

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/no

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
each stanza
Mar 24th 2005
1
CoSign
Apr 14th 2005
10
RE: poets purpose
Mar 24th 2005
2
i still like it.
Apr 12th 2005
3
it seems as if you've described a poet's purpse perfectly
Apr 12th 2005
4
RE: poets purpose
Apr 12th 2005
5
RE: poets purpose
Apr 13th 2005
6
archive
Apr 13th 2005
7
i second n/m
Apr 13th 2005
8
      thanks RGV and ladee
Apr 13th 2005
9

rgv
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Thu Mar-24-05 06:08 PM

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1. "each stanza"
In response to Reply # 0


          

was absolutely perfect.

aside: checks buddylist--

where u been?

i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

  

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KnowOne
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Thu Apr-14-05 10:04 AM

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10. "CoSign"
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n/m

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"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

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gsquared
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Thu Mar-24-05 06:20 PM

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2. "RE: poets purpose"
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..excellent..

  

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jayare214
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Tue Apr-12-05 06:04 PM

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3. "i still like it."
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sometimes I write something and come back to it and it doesnt resonate with me. It happens less and less as I gain experience expressing myself. This one I still do enjoy a great deal.
-j

my music group:
http://www.facebook.com/beataroundabush
http://www.lastfm.com/beataroundabush
http://www.reverbnation.com/beataroundabush
http://www.myspace.com/beataroundabush

My beats:
www.myspace.com/jayarejohnson

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/no

  

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the perfect mistake
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Tue Apr-12-05 06:37 PM

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4. "it seems as if you've described a poet's purpse perfectly"
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let them bathe
in transcendental thoughts
and sage wisdom
foreign to ears of villians
lost to materialism.

let them rise
beyond the confines
of any existence
and find god
in the absence of any religion

let them lead
by expanidng the imaginations of all
questioning love's fall
and heeding an artist's call.

especially above... Peace~


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to get your attention. ŠVan Hunt

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Soulbrotha
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Tue Apr-12-05 09:12 PM

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5. "RE: poets purpose"
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AHAH! BAM!

Is what I felt after reading this. It was perfect..like rgv said.

"Do to others what you would others have done unto you." - The Lord Jesus Christ

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MUSE
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Wed Apr-13-05 05:08 PM

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6. "RE: poets purpose"
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great prayer...

even sounds like a prayer for youth of today... i'm diggin it, fam... feelin it...

MUSE

good to read yr works again... one.

...
..
.

Speak and it shall manifest
Breathe and it shall live
Love and it shall triumph
Give and it shall never be
lost... ever... - MarcArthur
St. Juste

"not one voice unheard" -
VOICES NYC (Brooklyn, NY)

HALLELU YAHWEH! AMEN

  

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rgv
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7. "archive"
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i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

  

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LaDeeDeF_99
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Wed Apr-13-05 08:48 PM

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8. "i second n/m"
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peace
ladee

  

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jayare214
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Wed Apr-13-05 09:57 PM

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9. "thanks RGV and ladee"
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u guys are 2 very nice...i appreciate the love and the peeps on this all...good lookin muse, it was kinda exactly that.
-j

my music group:
http://www.facebook.com/beataroundabush
http://www.lastfm.com/beataroundabush
http://www.reverbnation.com/beataroundabush
http://www.myspace.com/beataroundabush

My beats:
www.myspace.com/jayarejohnson

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/no

  

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