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14272, poets purpose
Posted by jayare214, Thu Mar-24-05 05:37 PM
let them gather
like a fearsome storm,
black wrath of scorn condensed
and poured fourth in form.

let them rain
and drench all that are dry
with the force of life
infused in words released to fly.

let them bathe
in transcendental thoughts
and sage wisdom
foreign to ears of villians
lost to materialism.

let them rise
beyond the confines
of any existence
and find god
in the absence of any religion

let them lead
by expanidng the imaginations of all
questioning love's fall
and heeding an artist's call.
14273, each stanza
Posted by rgv, Thu Mar-24-05 06:08 PM
was absolutely perfect.

aside: checks buddylist--

where u been?
14274, CoSign
Posted by KnowOne, Thu Apr-14-05 10:04 AM
n/m
14275, RE: poets purpose
Posted by gsquared, Thu Mar-24-05 06:20 PM
..excellent..
14276, i still like it.
Posted by jayare214, Tue Apr-12-05 06:04 PM
sometimes I write something and come back to it and it doesnt resonate with me. It happens less and less as I gain experience expressing myself. This one I still do enjoy a great deal.
-j
14277, it seems as if you've described a poet's purpse perfectly
Posted by the perfect mistake, Tue Apr-12-05 06:37 PM
let them bathe
in transcendental thoughts
and sage wisdom
foreign to ears of villians
lost to materialism.

let them rise
beyond the confines
of any existence
and find god
in the absence of any religion

let them lead
by expanidng the imaginations of all
questioning love's fall
and heeding an artist's call.

especially above... Peace~


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14278, RE: poets purpose
Posted by Soulbrotha, Tue Apr-12-05 09:12 PM
AHAH! BAM!

Is what I felt after reading this. It was perfect..like rgv said.
14279, RE: poets purpose
Posted by MUSE, Wed Apr-13-05 05:08 PM
great prayer...

even sounds like a prayer for youth of today... i'm diggin it, fam... feelin it...

MUSE

good to read yr works again... one.
14280, archive
Posted by rgv, Wed Apr-13-05 08:47 PM
14281, i second n/m
Posted by LaDeeDeF_99, Wed Apr-13-05 08:48 PM
peace
ladee
14282, thanks RGV and ladee
Posted by jayare214, Wed Apr-13-05 09:57 PM
u guys are 2 very nice...i appreciate the love and the peeps on this all...good lookin muse, it was kinda exactly that.
-j