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14272, poets purpose Posted by jayare214, Thu Mar-24-05 05:37 PM
let them gather like a fearsome storm, black wrath of scorn condensed and poured fourth in form.
let them rain and drench all that are dry with the force of life infused in words released to fly.
let them bathe in transcendental thoughts and sage wisdom foreign to ears of villians lost to materialism.
let them rise beyond the confines of any existence and find god in the absence of any religion
let them lead by expanidng the imaginations of all questioning love's fall and heeding an artist's call.
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14273, each stanza Posted by rgv, Thu Mar-24-05 06:08 PM
was absolutely perfect.
aside: checks buddylist--
where u been?
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14274, CoSign Posted by KnowOne, Thu Apr-14-05 10:04 AM
n/m
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14275, RE: poets purpose Posted by gsquared, Thu Mar-24-05 06:20 PM
..excellent..
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14276, i still like it. Posted by jayare214, Tue Apr-12-05 06:04 PM
sometimes I write something and come back to it and it doesnt resonate with me. It happens less and less as I gain experience expressing myself. This one I still do enjoy a great deal. -j
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14277, it seems as if you've described a poet's purpse perfectly Posted by the perfect mistake, Tue Apr-12-05 06:37 PM
let them bathe in transcendental thoughts and sage wisdom foreign to ears of villians lost to materialism.
let them rise beyond the confines of any existence and find god in the absence of any religion
let them lead by expanidng the imaginations of all questioning love's fall and heeding an artist's call.
especially above... Peace~
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14278, RE: poets purpose Posted by Soulbrotha, Tue Apr-12-05 09:12 PM
AHAH! BAM!
Is what I felt after reading this. It was perfect..like rgv said.
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14279, RE: poets purpose Posted by MUSE, Wed Apr-13-05 05:08 PM
great prayer...
even sounds like a prayer for youth of today... i'm diggin it, fam... feelin it...
MUSE
good to read yr works again... one.
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14280, archive Posted by rgv, Wed Apr-13-05 08:47 PM
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14281, i second n/m Posted by LaDeeDeF_99, Wed Apr-13-05 08:48 PM
peace ladee
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14282, thanks RGV and ladee Posted by jayare214, Wed Apr-13-05 09:57 PM
u guys are 2 very nice...i appreciate the love and the peeps on this all...good lookin muse, it was kinda exactly that. -j
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