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Decstar
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Mon Apr-12-04 06:09 AM

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"King O the Ring (Round Three)"


  

          

sorry for bein a lil late.

SHAKE UP!!!!

this round is gonna be different. there will be no 2 battles, we goin back to 4. prove ya'll selves. my rules still APPLY. if u dont remember, here they are:

>>anyway, new rules. no holes barred. eat ya opponent alive, BUT, keep a min. curse words, be VERY creative, and no long ass verses. no gunplay either, especially when ya'll cats aint gonna do that bullshit. be gully but realistic, feels me.

votin is extended til 1pm EST monday. then u'll have til 4 pm TUESDAY........TUESDAY, people, 4 muthafuckin o clock. no late verses will be acceptin. no bullshit will be accepted. if i find "i'll kill a nigga" or any gunplay, YA CUT. if i find any racial slurs or anything, YA CUT.

ya wanna bitch and moan, zin'll put a foot in ya ass. no bitches allowed in this tourney.


thank ya kindly<<<

so here are tha match ups

Instant Axis vs WILDOUT
MircleRic vs Vash the Stampede
Bartek vs RatpackSlim
PG vs Xtreme

verses should be in by 4 pm EST tomorrow. NO EXCUSES

thank ya kindly

let's get tha gunshots goin!!!!!!!


"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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RE: King O the Ring (Round Three)
Apr 12th 2004
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RE: King O the Ring (Round Three)
Apr 12th 2004
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      RE: King O the Ring (Round Three)
Apr 12th 2004
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           look at it like this
Apr 12th 2004
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                RE: look at it like this
Apr 12th 2004
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                     that shyt is funny the way you put peace at the end
Apr 12th 2004
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                          you talk too much
Apr 12th 2004
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                          that's great
Apr 12th 2004
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                          RE: that shyt is funny the way you put peace at the end
Apr 12th 2004
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                               all the more reason why it is irrelevant
Apr 12th 2004
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                               naw, i'm not zin's alias
Apr 12th 2004
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                                    RE: naw, i'm not zin's alias
Apr 12th 2004
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see Decstar's avatar?
Apr 12th 2004
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sports report update
Apr 12th 2004
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RE: sports report update
Apr 12th 2004
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i beat veterans all the tyme
Apr 12th 2004
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i sent the verse in earlier
Apr 12th 2004
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i'm a baaaaaaaaaaaaad man
Apr 12th 2004
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RE: i'm a baaaaaaaaaaaaad man
Apr 12th 2004
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      yo, you gotta beat wildout
Apr 12th 2004
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           normal height? lol
Apr 12th 2004
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                RE: normal height? lol
Apr 12th 2004
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                     yeah, dog
Apr 13th 2004
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yo. u need to start incorporating females in dis..just
Apr 13th 2004
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it don't matter whut sex they is
Apr 13th 2004
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      son i think ur plate is full
Apr 13th 2004
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           bring it
Apr 13th 2004
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                *looks around* where's the heat at..
Apr 14th 2004
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RE: King O the Ring (Round Three)
Apr 13th 2004
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it sure would suck if i lost
Apr 13th 2004
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RE: it sure would suck if i lost
Apr 13th 2004
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      i'm not fuckin' zin
Apr 13th 2004
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      lol no doubt
Apr 13th 2004
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      RE: it sure would suck if i lost
Apr 13th 2004
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Instant Axis vs WILDOUT
Apr 13th 2004
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Axe
Apr 13th 2004
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AX
Apr 13th 2004
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AX
Apr 13th 2004
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......NM
Apr 13th 2004
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RE: Instant Axis won, but
Apr 13th 2004
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fo sho
Apr 14th 2004
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RE: Instant Axis vs WILDOUT
Apr 14th 2004
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MircleRic vs Vash the Stampede
Apr 13th 2004
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M-Ric, if he's not DQ'd
Apr 13th 2004
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RE: M-Ric, if he's not DQ'd
Apr 13th 2004
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      ah.. didn't see that
Apr 13th 2004
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Ric
Apr 13th 2004
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M-Ric
Apr 13th 2004
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ric...
Apr 13th 2004
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RE: MircleRic
Apr 13th 2004
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the sad part is
Apr 13th 2004
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MircleRic
Apr 13th 2004
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Bartek vs RatpackSlim
Apr 13th 2004
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tie
Apr 13th 2004
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RE: tie
Apr 13th 2004
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      RE: tie
Apr 13th 2004
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           RE: tie
Apr 13th 2004
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RE: Bartek vs RatpackSlim
Apr 13th 2004
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Ima say tek but...
Apr 13th 2004
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well, ric...
Apr 13th 2004
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      RE: well, ric...
Apr 13th 2004
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      RE: well, ric...
Apr 13th 2004
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           RE: well, ric...
Apr 13th 2004
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RE: Bartek vs RatpackSlim
Apr 13th 2004
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Bartek
Apr 13th 2004
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PG vs Xtreme
Apr 13th 2004
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PG
Apr 13th 2004
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RE: PG..cosign with frosted
Apr 13th 2004
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PG
Apr 13th 2004
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ooops
etch and sketch
Apr 13th 2004
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PG
Apr 13th 2004
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RE: PG
Apr 13th 2004
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RE: PG vs Xtreme
Apr 13th 2004
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ARCHIVE
Apr 15th 2004
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RE: ARCHIVE
Apr 20th 2004
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BarTek
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Mon Apr-12-04 06:20 AM

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1. "RE: King O the Ring (Round Three)"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

this round is gonna be different. there will be no 2 battles, we goin back to 4.

Can you clarify that? And what are these new cats doing in the tourney? Hmm...A little confused.

Peace.

let's play ping pong ■

  

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Decstar
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Mon Apr-12-04 06:27 AM

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2. "RE: King O the Ring (Round Three)"
In response to Reply # 1


  

          

considered this another rock on tha carpet to tha throne, kid. kick tha shit outta ya opponent and move on. simple

it's been a minute since good battlin. at least from my span of view, so if it's gonna be a KING of tha ring, no doubt, this will be no prob to handle and will also show how grateful he is.

u know u got tha heat, slay tha cat. just tryin to see some hot shit, ya kno. give tha people what they want. and also give tha cats that battle, but dont do it much a chance to play wit tha big dogs. they might earn some stripes outta this, both on they ass and shirt, that if u can take it there.

that is all, fam. get to battlin

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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Instant Axis
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Mon Apr-12-04 08:29 AM

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3. "RE: King O the Ring (Round Three)"
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ummmmmmmmmmm....i really dont care either way but for cats who didnt even start in the tourent to be automattically put in the 3rd round is somewhat suspect to me and then to top it off....i draw another tough opponent which i dont care about either but why the extension if we already had people in the battle...whats the point of signing up for a tourney if you can get in without signing up. fuck it tho....i'll have my verse when you see it...peace.

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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Vash the Stampede
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Mon Apr-12-04 08:50 AM

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5. "look at it like this"
In response to Reply # 3


  

          

dec knows that we so ill that we would'of made it this far anyway. y'all were priviledged to be able to compete in order to face off against us.

my verse = in.

bring it on. you go'n get served . . . the pancakes tat i serve everyone that i defeat . . . bytches.

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody said that this was sig worthy, so, here it is:
"i like some of his music. i just don't like the idea of him being a marketing ploy to get me to waste perfectly good backpack money on a rocafella cd."

fuckers

war

outro

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody sa

  

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Instant Axis
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Mon Apr-12-04 09:04 AM

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6. "RE: look at it like this"
In response to Reply # 5


  

          

honestly do you think i care if you priviledged to lick my nuts or not..it really dont matter....you in the battle...get past Ric and if i get past Wildout then you can continue the gibberish...other than that you just another head behind a monitor squawkin......peace

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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Vash the Stampede
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Mon Apr-12-04 09:12 AM

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7. "that shyt is funny the way you put peace at the end"
In response to Reply # 6


  

          

of yo' post. regardless, alls i'm sayin' is, i'm thew illest emcee on the boards (wit' the exception of MAYBE kweli). an' i'm aims to prove it.

if that means detroyin' your and other souls in this tounament to prove that, then so be it.

niggaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, you a weak ass hooooooooooooooooe/
i would kick you in yo' dick, but you don't have oooooooooooooooooone
vagina havin' mutha fuckaaaaaaaaaaaaa, oooooooooooooooooooooooh, you niggas just c'ain't fuck wit' meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

out

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody said that this was sig worthy, so, here it is:
"i like some of his music. i just don't like the idea of him being a marketing ploy to get me to waste perfectly good backpack money on a rocafella cd."

fuckers

war

outro

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody sa

  

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Frosted_Flake
Member since Mar 03rd 2004
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Mon Apr-12-04 09:18 AM

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8. "you talk too much"
In response to Reply # 7


  

          

I listened to the tracks on the site, and they aight, but I've heard better from peeps on here with no record.
don't compare yourself to kweli... you'll hurt yourself.
let your battle verses talk for you.
PEACE

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Vash the Stampede
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Mon Apr-12-04 09:37 AM

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11. "that's great"
In response to Reply # 8
Mon Apr-12-04 09:54 AM

  

          

i'm glad folks are clickin' the link. you just boosted my confidence by three points

shyt, you'd think that y'all never heard a dude shyt talk before.

oh, an' i wasn't just comparin' myself to kweli, i was sayin' that i'm very likely better than him.

danm i'm ill, aw shyt, mutha fucker.
got damnit, korg tri-ton. shyt, nigga.

'later

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody said that this was sig worthy, so, here it is:
"i like some of his music. i just don't like the idea of him being a marketing ploy to get me to waste perfectly good backpack money on a rocafella cd."

fuckers

war

outro

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody sa

  

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BarTek
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Mon Apr-12-04 09:18 AM

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9. "RE: that shyt is funny the way you put peace at the end"
In response to Reply # 7


  

          

if i dind't know any better, i'd think you were Zin in alias.

new cats in the tourney is suspect, and kills the whole point of this. it's kinda wack to just throw new cats in like that.

shrug.

let's play ping pong ■

  

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PG
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Mon Apr-12-04 09:31 AM

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10. "all the more reason why it is irrelevant"
In response to Reply # 9


  

          

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Vash the Stampede
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12. "naw, i'm not zin's alias"
In response to Reply # 9


  

          

i've been relentlessly clear about the alias issue in gd.

but i can feel you on the throwin' folks in the battle in the third round . . . but on the same note, i got the call, so i'm comin' for the challenge. i'm not gonna be like, "naw man, that's not cool to just throw me in there like that."

an' if y'all really that ill, it shouldn't be no problem, right?
/\ more shyt talk/\

'later

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody said that this was sig worthy, so, here it is:
"i like some of his music. i just don't like the idea of him being a marketing ploy to get me to waste perfectly good backpack money on a rocafella cd."

fuckers

war

outro

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody sa

  

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Instant Axis
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Mon Apr-12-04 10:11 AM

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13. "RE: naw, i'm not zin's alias"
In response to Reply # 12


  

          

dude is comedy..fuck it...i digs it...peace.

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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Frosted_Flake
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Mon Apr-12-04 08:39 AM

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4. "see Decstar's avatar?"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

that's him sayin 'you're too close!' lol
y'all do ya thang, let's see some heat!

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blak_yukon
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14. "sports report update"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

with Decstar manning the helm in Zin's absence. there's been a bit of a change. yup, seems the goal is to breathe new life into a tourney where it seems most cats here have squared off against one another at one time or...another,ha. with that...we've seen more newbies invited and flap their jibs as if they survived mad collisions with many a mic mechanic out there.
my query to them(newbies)is this...
what will it mean to you if you should beat a vet or a known regular here at the freestyle boards? what makes you a king? or are you just joking.
we're going to find out as this event presses on,folks

this is blak yukon for yukon magazine...wash behind your ears

back to you...

----------sig-----------

http://unclevicart.com/

me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc

dude, getting a response from the folks at freestyle is like watching water boil...© Tek

  

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MiracleRic
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Mon Apr-12-04 10:52 AM

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15. "RE: sports report update"
In response to Reply # 14


  

          

lol, u crazy blak, report them ass whuppins, newbies, get snacked on like scoobys

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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Vash the Stampede
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16. "i beat veterans all the tyme"
In response to Reply # 14


  

          

so that wont really mean that much to me. and i'm gonna show you whut makes me king when those verses get posted.

MY NUTS, GET OFF 'EM!!!

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody said that this was sig worthy, so, here it is:
"i like some of his music. i just don't like the idea of him being a marketing ploy to get me to waste perfectly good backpack money on a rocafella cd."

fuckers

war

outro

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody sa

  

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MiracleRic
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Mon Apr-12-04 03:25 PM

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17. "i sent the verse in earlier"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

i forgot to save it too, damn, oh well

its still SLAY TIME!!!

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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Vash the Stampede
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18. "i'm a baaaaaaaaaaaaad man"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

i'm the smartest, best lookin' mutha fucka' you ever seen.
you c'ain't fuck wit' me, nigga.
i'm so mutha fuckin' ill, that i give aids lessons on how to be sick.
i'm so mutha fuckin' cool, that i make anitfreeze say, "damn you cold"
oh shyt, nigga, you wish you was half the man i am, an' i'm only five foot six.

out

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody said that this was sig worthy, so, here it is:
"i like some of his music. i just don't like the idea of him being a marketing ploy to get me to waste perfectly good backpack money on a rocafella cd."

fuckers

war

outro

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody sa

  

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Instant Axis
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Mon Apr-12-04 04:51 PM

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19. "RE: i'm a baaaaaaaaaaaaad man"
In response to Reply # 18


  

          

"i'm only five foot six"


me too

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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Vash the Stampede
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Mon Apr-12-04 05:15 PM

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20. "yo, you gotta beat wildout"
In response to Reply # 19


  

          

then we could battle, an' it'd be the

"CLASH OF THE NORMAL-HIEGHT ASS MUTHA'FUCKA'S"

it'd be classic

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody said that this was sig worthy, so, here it is:
"i like some of his music. i just don't like the idea of him being a marketing ploy to get me to waste perfectly good backpack money on a rocafella cd."

fuckers

war

outro

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody sa

  

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Frosted_Flake
Member since Mar 03rd 2004
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Mon Apr-12-04 05:30 PM

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21. "normal height? lol"
In response to Reply # 20


  

          

sure, in China.

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Frosted_Flake, Frosted_Flake, Frosted_FlakeFrosted_Flake and Frosted_Flak

  

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Instant Axis
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Mon Apr-12-04 05:42 PM

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22. "RE: normal height? lol"
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cats is wildin at 5'6 son....you aint know!!!!!

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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Vash the Stampede
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23. "yeah, dog"
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around the way they call me "eddie the five six."

them five six boys is on the rise . . . just not in hieght.

damn i c'ain't wait 'til four o'clock.

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody said that this was sig worthy, so, here it is:
"i like some of his music. i just don't like the idea of him being a marketing ploy to get me to waste perfectly good backpack money on a rocafella cd."

fuckers

war

outro

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody sa

  

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clarion
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24. "yo. u need to start incorporating females in dis..just"
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*****************************
Things to Do in Detroit:

Mary J. Blige @Fox Theatre on April 15th

$10 Concert (featuring:Slum Village, Obie Thrice, Dweli, Kanye West, Carl Thomas and more) @State Theatre on April 29th

Spring Fever on April 30th sponsored by LTD productions...holla@ me for more info..


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Vash the Stampede
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25. "it don't matter whut sex they is"
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i'm eatin' all emcees.

oh shyt, i'm sweet.

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody said that this was sig worthy, so, here it is:
"i like some of his music. i just don't like the idea of him being a marketing ploy to get me to waste perfectly good backpack money on a rocafella cd."

fuckers

war

outro

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody sa

  

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clarion
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26. "son i think ur plate is full"
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u might wanna walk away w/stagnate lines
that stank...

..

  

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Vash the Stampede
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28. "bring it"
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you go'n get SERVED, just like anybody else that step to me.

you'll catch a fresh stack, an' i'm not talkin' 'bout no pancakes that's hot.

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody said that this was sig worthy, so, here it is:
"i like some of his music. i just don't like the idea of him being a marketing ploy to get me to waste perfectly good backpack money on a rocafella cd."

fuckers

war

outro

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody sa

  

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clarion
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73. "*looks around* where's the heat at.."
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i was looking for some quick lines
to show me u can diversify about the ways u think
u can serve me..


..

  

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BarTek
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27. "RE: King O the Ring (Round Three)"
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Verse In

let's play ping pong ■

  

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Vash the Stampede
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29. "it sure would suck if i lost"
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after all the shyt i been talkin'. oh well, i just have to make sure that doesn't happen . . . by talkin' even more shyt.

a nigga couldn't see me wit' a telescope, aimed at my person, even if they had x-ray vision.



*chuckles* . . . i'll pro'lly lose, just 'cause nobody wants to vote for my cocky ass. oh well.

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody said that this was sig worthy, so, here it is:
"i like some of his music. i just don't like the idea of him being a marketing ploy to get me to waste perfectly good backpack money on a rocafella cd."

fuckers

war

outro

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody sa

  

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BarTek
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30. "RE: it sure would suck if i lost"
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lol you funny zin.

let's play ping pong ■

  

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Vash the Stampede
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31. "i'm not fuckin' zin"
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the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody said that this was sig worthy, so, here it is:
"i like some of his music. i just don't like the idea of him being a marketing ploy to get me to waste perfectly good backpack money on a rocafella cd."

fuckers

war

outro

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody sa

  

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PG
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35. "lol no doubt"
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kids is funny thinkin zin would be spending his honeymoon like this..

forreal I'll give you an honest vote ya cockyness is irrelevant.. you got your work cut out for ya though cause I know what kinda heat your opponent has but I ain't familiar with you yet.

  

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MiracleRic
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33. "RE: it sure would suck if i lost"
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tek, he cant be zin, the audios dont match, not every1 talkin trash is zin yo, lol, dude just got married, do u really think he cares about this that much

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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Decstar
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32. "Instant Axis vs WILDOUT"
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Ax:

career change in order...blemish ya vision...total package ya flow...fed-ex the wisdom...you listinin....i dice raw cats...pull the roots out ya neck and collide on track...yo paizon...you rap...ive heard the audios.....Wildout spits mucas like tikes with a snotty nose.....ya awfully close to catchin the butt of the gun...thats border line voters but id never kill my son....just damage ya pride..its just standard...realize.....i still rise to the occasion...you chasin a figmant of ya imagination in place then....a mirrored image..its vintage...i slay cats like you before the sentences finish....hence the appearence of your 3rd round dismiss...i knock out cats like Teddy P in this bitch.....(another love TKO!!!)....heavy hand Duran its quick sand...you sugar ray..."when its over" i might shake ya hand....straight floor plans laid the path of victory...you beating me is like a man with no dick you see....it just aint happenin....its Frakson....Sam Jack young....you lack the lung power to spit this gun powder....shrapnal in the form of words...control alt delete....restart ya brains nerves.....dont start...refrain bird...i shatter pigeons...Wildout on the block...more like passive bitchin....ya ass is itchin..learn to wipe ya shit....cause you couldnt drop Frak if you was a pregnant bitch



WILDOUT:

i pray for your own sake that you can live upto your name
cause anything less then instant axis going have you trapped before your brain can connect to the oxygen thats trapped in your veins ill catch you when you fumble with your keys..catch me at your front door strangling out the air your breathe now-a-days cats is scared of these backstabbing clowns but im here to bring back the warrior styles fuck their childhood fears.. i never was a boy im the product of some seriously fucked up childhood years..and i like knives not guns because i been real gully since the start and i couldnt afford none..battling for fun? shit seems real alien to me..i leave punchlines to comedians..youll never catch a vet tryna calm a wolf like me..ill leave you inside the outline bring your heart out for the first time youll find theres a thin line between your skin and your flesh listen to my melody while your neck attached to the piano wire while i tap on the keys whether or not your loved like pac..aint no one stopping the bees of the candy man while i swarm on you and leave you rotting in the fields under leaves..cause in the end all youll be is some flesh given to the rats to eat..just some more left overs for you bitch ass carnavors to feed on


"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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44. "Axe"
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Both had mad fire but Frak had a little more life to it.. he seemd to be enjoying it where as wild you just came something evil..

My favorite lines from Ax:


>ya awfully close to
>catchin the butt of the gun...thats border line voters but
>id never kill my son....

>a
>mirrored image..its vintage...i slay cats like you before
>the sentences finish

>heavy hand Duran its
>quick sand...you sugar ray..."when its over" i might shake
>ya hand....straight floor plans laid the path of
>victory...you beating me is like a man

shrapnal in the form of words...control alt
>delete....restart ya brains nerves.


My word on Wildouts peace:

Dam wild that whole thing was real gully... scary shit I guess I would have just liked it to seem like you were having a little fun.. shit was too heavy.

>WILDOUT:
>
>i pray for your own sake that you can live upto your name
>cause anything less then instant axis going have you trapped
>before your brain can connect to the oxygen thats trapped in
>your veins ill catch you when you fumble with your
>keys..catch me at your front door strangling out the air
>your breathe now-a-days cats is scared of these backstabbing
>clowns but im here to bring back the warrior styles fuck
>their childhood fears.. i never was a boy im the product of
>some seriously fucked up childhood years..and i like knives
>not guns because i been real gully since the start and i
>couldnt afford none..battling for fun? shit seems real alien
>to me..i leave punchlines to comedians..youll never catch a
>vet tryna calm a wolf like me..ill leave you inside the
>outline bring your heart out for the first time youll find
>theres a thin line between your skin and your flesh listen
>to my melody while your neck attached to the piano wire
>while i tap on the keys whether or not your loved like
>pac..aint no one stopping the bees of the candy man while i
>swarm on you and leave you rotting in the fields under
>leaves..cause in the end all youll be is some flesh given to
>the rats to eat..just some more left overs for you bitch ass
>carnavors to feed on

  

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KosherSam
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46. "AX"
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>you lack the lung power to spit this gun
>powder....shrapnal in the form of words...control alt
>delete....restart ya brains nerves

dope...

wildout, it was tough to get into the flow b/c you didnt break it up, it just kinda read like prose, and that made it kinda tough to flow with, but even still i thought ax's verse was better

*Jews you*

"this is okp tho, reading is completely optional" (c) desus

Proceed with caution. I am overtly racist.

<-- In Pigpen we trust

  

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MiracleRic
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52. "AX"
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flow was a major factor, and his shit had me chuckling, Wildout had some things going, but just not enough

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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BarTek
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56. "......NM"
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Tue Apr-13-04 10:40 AM

  

          

...

let's play ping pong ■

  

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BarTek
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64. "RE: Instant Axis won, but"
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WILDOUT wasn't really battlin, he was just showcasing:

youll never catch a vet tryna calm a wolf like me..ill leave you inside the outline bring your heart out for the first time youll find theres a thin line between your skin and your flesh listen to my melody while your neck attached to the piano wire while i tap on the keys whether or not your loved like pac

I like that, altho your flow needs some work, but I don't doubt you wrote this in a few minutes.

Peace.

let's play ping pong ■

  

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72. "fo sho"
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what you tryna say huh
what you tryna say
lol

ax aint really given me any ammo
so since there wasnt no jugular to target
(given the blind battle form)
i just came with some gully shit to get wit.

good to have u back tek.
((wo))

  

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cza_adonis
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71. "RE: Instant Axis vs WILDOUT"
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i think ax got this one

  

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Decstar
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34. "MircleRic vs Vash the Stampede"
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MircleRic:

you dont want lyrical combat, bronze-back, where ya poms at?, u cheer for me next round? i vex clowns, with each and every chest pound, cause my flow is mo iller then a silverback go-rilla, read the verse, no filler, i left enough rappin zombies, to show thriller, ya no killer, if ya heart is ya soulís pillar, I kick ya mast bitch, yous a poodle barkin at a mastiff, I leave vash stiff, stampede his last wish, and feed his ashes,to the masses, let this lamb bleed lashes, now thats earnin ya stripes, at ya burial, burnin ya mic, dats venerial, i layt t) u rockin play-text, to clog ya bloody bum, like violent gay sex, so when i say rex, its latin for kings with my swag that displays pecs, kingpin drop a rose on ya clothes, ya not a daredevil, u couldnt win a battle where we compare snare levels, i attack like a 3 o clock bully, ya sack is not wooly, 5 o clock shadow, u couldnt beat me in a scissors, paper, rock battle, gadzooks, u aint got the wind, even if u had flutes, ask Zeus, i drag glutes, hand em to maximus, u on the thread handling axis nuts, so unless u hiding limbs, u approached with ya hands full, i spit king tridents phlegm, this mermaid get his damn skull, left like a permed braid, tender-heads-turn-page, ended ya bio, my glo, is refined like old liquor, and very sour, ya got stole quicker then a lone kid's eddie bauer


Vash the Stampede:

me vs him? yo that's some hysterical shyt/
mayonaise colored benz'll hit miracal ric/
so here i go, throwin' my hat in the battle/
'bought to eat this dude ric, like he was some processed cattle/
NOW WHO WANT BEEF?!? i ain't hearin' no answers?/
'cause you know i'll eat away at ya' soul like my name was cancer/
flash the stampede, my style is too quick, wit' the wit/
click the link, ILLIANCErecords. com'll give you tips/
need try find cover from my vitrolic words/
'cause my sentences are composed of nouns and verbs/
each constructed wit' intent to make you feel ubsurd/
specially when ya' style lacks verve// an' you had the nerve/
to actually try an' battle me, off the little bit you heard?/
then i'm a have to learn you the lesson that you deserve/
don't try to discern/ my rhymes, 'cause they way to superb/
try it, an' you'll only exist under six feet of dirt/
'cause yeah, i know some thugs too/ an' me an' my crew/
mus' all have x-ray vision, 'cause we all can see through you/
silly rappers/ ever dapper/ love to act as if they matter/
really they just causin' laughter/ dude, i'm to through/



"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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Frosted_Flake
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36. "M-Ric, if he's not DQ'd"
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<I kick ya mast bitch, yous a poodle barkin at a mastiff, I leave vash stiff, stampede his last wish, and feed his ashes,to the masses, let this lamb bleed lashes>
that was pure heat MiracleRic.
but that line about 'violent gay sex'? I'ma let Decstar sort this one out.

Vash.. I was seriously disappointed. reminds me of that Redman line...
'I figured it out, y'all nukkas ain't as big as ya mouth'

------------------------------------------------------------
<------ I'm in love... I'm all shook up.

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Frosted_Flake, Frosted_Flake, Frosted_FlakeFrosted_Flake and Frosted_Flak

  

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MiracleRic
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40. "RE: M-Ric, if he's not DQ'd"
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he allowed gay jokes this time, or else i wouldnt have used it
thanx tho

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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42. "ah.. didn't see that"
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either way, it did take away from the flow.
with that said, M-Ric takes it

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Frosted_Flake, Frosted_Flake, Frosted_FlakeFrosted_Flake and Frosted_Flak

  

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KosherSam
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48. "Ric"
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One word - HEAT

*Jews you*

"this is okp tho, reading is completely optional" (c) desus

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58. "M-Ric"
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if for no other reason, these lines:

"kingpin drop a rose on ya clothes, ya not a daredevil, u couldnt win a battle where we compare snare levels"

turn them shits up!
turn 'em UP!

-----
"You Sensitive Bastard", Rob Sturma's latest book of poems, is available directly from the author. It's a pretty book with a real ISBN number and everything.

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Otto
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60. "ric..."
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-Otto

  

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65. "RE: MircleRic"
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No contest, really though.

peace.

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Vash the Stampede
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67. "the sad part is"
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that i'm still gonna brag . . . right up untill i do actually win

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody said that this was sig worthy, so, here it is:
"i like some of his music. i just don't like the idea of him being a marketing ploy to get me to waste perfectly good backpack money on a rocafella cd."

fuckers

war

outro

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody sa

  

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Instant Axis
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70. "MircleRic"
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Vash....only one 5'6 cat left in the mix.....you disappointed me son....Ric took this easily with punches and flow...made you look like a constipated cow with no shit to drop....just damn...Ric easily...peace.

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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37. "Bartek vs RatpackSlim"
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Bartek:

I scratched this on my pad, like I snatched a welcome mat, to ya head, i'm comin, closer, and quicker, than illicit grips of viscious words composed by critics, becuase, who are we spittin for, but really/
I make this known, this ain't my style, so, prepare for bile and liver, cause I spill like red wine but quicker/
An introduction to your induction into your function/
RatpackSlim, your Backpack'sthin, your canvas ain't thick enough to withstand my think/
I'm double brink, in a double sink, spilling double ink/
It's a stand up show, i'm the comic and you're my hand pup, I'm imitating, your voice, it goes "I gave up"/
This battle is not for the faint hearted and yet, no doubt, you will choose a feather to scribe with/
I respect your poetic ability, but as a battlist, you lack the ingenuity/
Welcome, to a ride of your mental, I speed on cerebral highways, so I can over take your receptor defense mode/
I'm spitting venom, like I should, I hear you scripting love odes, like you would, It's all good, I respect you, but that doesn't mean, I can't re-elect you, you are the new chairman of commerce, cause every hit that I offer, you can re-sell at the highest bid order, make profits, my presence is water, I'm flooding your gates like SkyWalker/
I can defeat you, with a slight shift in my consciousness, from respectful, to vengeful, I will take the form of a martyr, and disqualify myself in a point of abstractness/
I am a collector of souls, and I want yours too, it's a little thin, worn out, and chewed, I suppose there are too many rats in your Backpack, to Grim, and material too slim to withold my breath's span/
I'm going to impregnante your root canal's with my thoughts, the pain in your teeth, will spread like brushing with rocks/
Digest my words, if and after you swallowed, I know chewing was tough, but by that definition, the pain is still hollow/
I'm coming for your stomach, your arteries, and your heart, I don't want to destroy you, nah, I just want to bend your will to my might/
I'm stealing, the show, it's only a matter of steps, before I ascend to my crown, you winning this battle, is akin to me turning your frown upside down/
Ain't gonna happen, too grim, and too serious, I'm battling your shadow, so I can box with your illness/
Combining words, to devise battle raps, both philosophical, and intellectual, at that....intersection, you will find a red light, go, when it flashes, because the green is the release of my races/
Run you over, I may, or side swipe you, either way you look at it, I'm beyond, and beside you/
You done for/ I say that, in every verse, to every challenger, but for you, I had to transcript a muse, so that you would begin inspired to lose/
I shape shift when night time casts it's glance upon our shoulders/
I start as the moon, and transform into backpack straps, to strap you to a momentary binding of a jacket vest/
Put your raps back in your backpack, they are full of holes with a foul aroma, sat on, and chewed by a rat pack, I understand why you call yourself slim/
The nutrition by way of your means, or, the food for thought that you bring, is rotten, and only good for a short binge/
You cannot outwit me, or out match me, I have been raised to appear placid like acid/
My peaceful appearance, is a dark beauty, touch me, or drink from my grail and find your mind like a pail, collecting the reign of my hail/
The earth has a heart beat and I control it, count 4 times in 1 measure, find my treasure and record it/
4 times to 1, is the ratio of my verbal ability to your Noun (None)/
In my next measure, I will provide you with proof that my treasure, shines the brightest, and your treasure, is the lightest/
Rat, this ain't a silly battle, but I am silly competitor/ Consider our meeting like scrabble, Iím the sanitizer and I just spelled tranquilizer /
That means, you a rat placed in a tranquil mind state, somewhat, like a vegetable, but not really, if I was that silly, I'd place you in a blender and make a health shake/


RatpackSlim:

welcome to the squared circle, king of the ring
bartek the people's champ against the next big thing
flashback to ratpack grabbing the strap
a radioactive cat cleaning up like hazmat
less about the battlerap
more open to spoken word
but dec threw me in the set cuz we need a token nerd
and if i can't flip styles, maybe i'll just flip the bird
as we james bond over drinks, leaving you shaken, not stirred
got temptations just to take this
but if tek is like chappelle, ya know he's gonna get his show back
and he'll rock a brand new jersey
while i'll sport the same old throwback
in fact, me entering this tourney? a joke worthy of monty python
but at least it's got y'all talking
just like photo's hacked-up icons
so in the interest of keeping it clean, i'm gonna bail while still pristine
and i'm out like r. kelly as i say peace on sweet sixteens...

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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39. "tie"
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Bartek: waaaaaaaaaaay too longwinded, I just couldn't see any of your punches (too drawn out, maybe?)
Ratpackslim: again, not enough punch...

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43. "RE: tie"
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You have to read, and *think*. It's a battle of wits. No line limit either. I thought I'd make this one a doozie. Tell you what, in your case, you can count 18 lines into mine, and judge on that considering Rat wrote 18 lines.

Peace.

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47. "RE: tie"
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yo, tek, even if some of these heads can't hear us, nice bout (i have mad respect for you battlecats...i haven't gotten down like that in years. fun to flex those muscles again for a minute).

and thanks to dec for giving me the chance to spit.

now SOMEBODY VOTE!

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50. "RE: tie"
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No Doubt Rat, was mad fun. Knowing that I had to battle you, was a challenge indeed.

Peace and Daps!!

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cza_adonis
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45. "RE: Bartek vs RatpackSlim"
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the best battle was vash and ric the others were boreing

  

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51. "Ima say tek but..."
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WTF was u smokin tek???!!!

u stay writing novels of shit, trim that ish down, u had a few punches, and rat didnt really have any, he didnt even really up himself, he just had a nice verse, so ima give it to tek since he actually had a few lines "punching" the other person, but this may have been the worse "battle" i seen in a while, wtf, i thought i had a bad round, wtf!!!

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53. "well, ric..."
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truth be told, i was a bit baffled as to why i got thrown in the mix, and as you can read in my verse, i'm no battle rapper. so for me, i figured the best thing to do was have fun with the format and take the wind out of my own sails (reverse battlerap?).

now, when you say no punches, i assume you mean nothing directly dissing tek, and you got me there. but shit, people, give a dude some love for trying to bring wordplay back into the mix! i know that's not what ya vote on, but y'all elitists act like if i ain't spittin' dick and fart jokes like MC Kevin Smith, i'm a bad writer...

...or maybe i just got in way over my head and i'm pouting. heh.

(and that my friends, is why you should never send a poet to do an emcee's job. he'll just get it all wrong and worry about clever over mean.)

I'M BROKE, BEEYOTCH!!!!
(honk honk)




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54. "RE: well, ric..."
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Well said, and within your words is my greatest frustration with battle raps. I have written many a verse that is not directly insulting, but only makes use of clever metaphors, and I have always lost the battle. In my verse against you, I tried to weave a few clever phrases, but I couldn't really draw against you. A few times I said I respected you, becuase I do. Peace Rat.

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55. "RE: well, ric..."
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ima be real, your wordplay was sick, as a matter of fact if u had called tek a long-winded bastid, u woulda won, im no elitist, i also have the problem of direct disses, so just a few sprinkled in with ya wordplay woulda won this i think, and it aint over, i gotta feeling peopole will give u this

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57. "RE: well, ric..."
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Relax yourself. There was no line limit, hence the purpose of it's length.

A lot of what I said probably flew over your head anyways.

Damn!

It was a verse for Rat, I'm sure he will see some of the wordplay, so please, just vote and keep your comments to yourself, because they are long winded and with no substance as demonstrated by your shifts. Get your mind right.

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63. "RE: Bartek vs RatpackSlim"
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That was a very nice verse.

Peace.

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69. "Bartek"
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this was a loooooooooooooooong read thanks in part to Tek and although it wasnt vintage Tek i still feel he pulled this one out and this line was hot

"RatpackSlim, your Backpack'sthin, your canvas ain't thick enough to withstand my think"

Rat brought what he could and did his thing...the shakin not stirred line was real hot but i dont think he had enough to take Tek...peace fellas.

fuck a sig!!!


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38. "PG vs Xtreme"
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PG:

you got big dreams like mars but can't get off the ground like Kuwait
got you on lock like Prison Guards brought you incarcerate
these bars your fate
stuck still up state while me and ya girl do the dirty back seat in cars you hate
now she a couple weeks late
and you ain't even had a conjugal.. so call your mom and ball I ain't done nothing wrong at all you the one who put her number on the wall
while you was busy shitting ya guts out in the bathroom stall
now you sitting ya putz as my last boom fall
feeling uncomfortable as you dump ya soul and that shit runs and all
burning like Ronsonal
can't spit cause ya tonsils crawl
tongue tied by your adrenal gland
why? I'm such a mean old man
a true artisan politicking partisan and you play the role of a martyr son
Pure Gold spit a wealth of burning venom and rage you barely got enough to earn minimum wage
I'm a god dammed institute you couldn't be sharp enough dressed in a Ginsu suit
I'm the king of poignant you the prince of moot I'm the cat that prints your loot
I shit you out my asshole just like the last soul
Predominate Game this shit is getting past old
you astounded how your ass grounded you past hounded
got the full pack chewing on ya carcass
ya counterfeit so out of it you only worried about your shoes like your name was Imelda Marcus
you are inconsequential
my first step in stomps ya mental
I broke ya see
vocally you ain't lived at all like baby that been choked by it's umbilical
it's unequivocal
Xtreme the text scream yo PG move on to the next scene this kids too busy having a wet dream



Xtreme:

You're tryin' to step?/
I'll hit with the mic before you take a breath/
Leavin' you gaspin/
You never really started, and already you a has been/
You the only fool that thinks your nice/
But I'm gonna interrogate that ass like Condoleeza Rice/
Makin' you question your own technique/
I'm roarin like 747, and your shit be soundin' like eek/
I'm blazin with str8 heat, so do like No Doubt and don't speak/
Or get shredded into mincemeat, ha! tryin' to convince me/
That you could dispence me, but come at your hardest you still coudn't pinch me/
I'm harrasing that ass like cops in Cincy/
Give me some elbow room I need some elbow room, in other words leave the building/
No ones safe, not even women and children/
So your bitch ass better hide/
I'm gonna do that ass like a one man genocide/
You have two options, forfeit, or comit involentary suicide

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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41. "PG"
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PG came more consistent. the Ginsu suit line was nice
Xtreme had a couple punches, but it seemed he didn't get started til line 6, and then wasn't creative enough.

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49. "RE: PG..cosign with frosted"
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n/m

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59. "PG"
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hella tight flow/inner rhyme

and the ginsu suit line killed me.

Pretty Good!

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etch and sketch

Tue Apr-13-04 11:45 AM

  
61. "ooops"
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lalala

  

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62. "PG"
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†† ima be honest...this battle wa spretty weak on both ends...Xtreme just didnt really get into it....had maybe one line that held some weight but nothin that could penetrate a cupcake on a hot soggy morning.....and PG whos flow dabbled in and out of niceness didnt really shit like i know he can but he did enough to win this battle and this line here


"Pure Gold spit a wealth of burning venom and rage you barely got enough to earn minimum wage
I'm a god dammed institute you couldn't be sharp enough dressed in a Ginsu suit"

basically won the round.....peace yall

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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66. "RE: PG"
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but this line by xtreme was funny and FITTING:

Makin' you question your own technique/
I'm roarin like 747, and your shit be soundin' like eek/


Muwahaha!

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68. "RE: PG vs Xtreme"
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I'm a god dammed institute you couldn't be sharp enough dressed in a Ginsu suit


best line in the tourney so far. ON THE REAL THO. PEACE

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74. "ARCHIVE"
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hghjgff

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75. "RE: ARCHIVE"
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Please.

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