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BarTek
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Sat Apr-18-09 02:28 AM

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"i saw a boy with a girl"


  

          

he had his head hung low
staring at his feet while she sat nearby
gently touching his arm
i could tell he was in heaven as he had nothing to say
looking like a regular rabble rouser
i laughed to myself
where was his true cadence that day
enchanted of course

i actually smiled
for the first time in a long while
thinking that love has a chance
i found myself downtown, drunk, high, a few hours later
and going home, i randomly sat next to a speech impediment of my own
there she sat, challenging me with random questions
daring to speak to me
i even told her
"people don't usually speak to me in public"
she just laughed

it was a good evening
my faith in love was reinstated
and my confidence instigated

thank you girl i never knew before
for saying hello and asking me
where that street was
and thank you for accepting my answer
even though i totally made it up

sincerely,
restored.

let's play ping pong ■

  

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i saw a boy with a girl [View all] , BarTek, Sat Apr-18-09 02:28 AM
 
Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: i saw a boy with a girl
Apr 18th 2009
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RE: i saw a boy with a girl
Apr 18th 2009
2
^^^This is what a good poem looks like
Apr 18th 2009
3
RE: i saw a boy with a girl
Apr 19th 2009
4
Thank you everyone, I felt it too.. and it was really nice..
Apr 19th 2009
5

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