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79502, i saw a boy with a girl Posted by BarTek, Sat Apr-18-09 02:28 AM
he had his head hung low staring at his feet while she sat nearby gently touching his arm i could tell he was in heaven as he had nothing to say looking like a regular rabble rouser i laughed to myself where was his true cadence that day enchanted of course
i actually smiled for the first time in a long while thinking that love has a chance i found myself downtown, drunk, high, a few hours later and going home, i randomly sat next to a speech impediment of my own there she sat, challenging me with random questions daring to speak to me i even told her "people don't usually speak to me in public" she just laughed
it was a good evening my faith in love was reinstated and my confidence instigated
thank you girl i never knew before for saying hello and asking me where that street was and thank you for accepting my answer even though i totally made it up
sincerely, restored.
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79504, RE: i saw a boy with a girl Posted by Skeet, Sat Apr-18-09 07:20 AM
Love IT! Brilliant piece!
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79514, RE: i saw a boy with a girl Posted by ASIEM, Sat Apr-18-09 02:08 PM
innocent release...is often missed
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79526, ^^^This is what a good poem looks like Posted by MarVeL, Sat Apr-18-09 11:42 PM
Love it tek. It really brings out feelings of happiness when I read it. Good work for sure.
http://www.myspace.com/k_o_s_determination
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79527, RE: i saw a boy with a girl Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Apr-19-09 12:25 AM
How sweet! ..... :)
Never give ^UP^ on the freshness of friendship/relationships/or just plain ol' wonderful Love -- *smiles*
*Felt*
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79543, Thank you everyone, I felt it too.. and it was really nice.. Posted by BarTek, Sun Apr-19-09 04:04 PM
who knows where life will take us... i suppose without the lapses of happiness/love we are not truly complete.. thanks again for reading!
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