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Topic subjecti saw a boy with a girl
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79502, i saw a boy with a girl
Posted by BarTek, Sat Apr-18-09 02:28 AM
he had his head hung low
staring at his feet while she sat nearby
gently touching his arm
i could tell he was in heaven as he had nothing to say
looking like a regular rabble rouser
i laughed to myself
where was his true cadence that day
enchanted of course

i actually smiled
for the first time in a long while
thinking that love has a chance
i found myself downtown, drunk, high, a few hours later
and going home, i randomly sat next to a speech impediment of my own
there she sat, challenging me with random questions
daring to speak to me
i even told her
"people don't usually speak to me in public"
she just laughed

it was a good evening
my faith in love was reinstated
and my confidence instigated

thank you girl i never knew before
for saying hello and asking me
where that street was
and thank you for accepting my answer
even though i totally made it up

sincerely,
restored.
79504, RE: i saw a boy with a girl
Posted by Skeet, Sat Apr-18-09 07:20 AM
Love IT! Brilliant piece!
79514, RE: i saw a boy with a girl
Posted by ASIEM, Sat Apr-18-09 02:08 PM
innocent release...is often missed
79526, ^^^This is what a good poem looks like
Posted by MarVeL, Sat Apr-18-09 11:42 PM

Love it tek. It really brings out feelings of happiness when I read it. Good work for sure.




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79527, RE: i saw a boy with a girl
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Apr-19-09 12:25 AM
How sweet! ..... :)

Never give ^UP^ on the freshness of friendship/relationships/or just plain ol' wonderful Love -- *smiles*


*Felt*


79543, Thank you everyone, I felt it too.. and it was really nice..
Posted by BarTek, Sun Apr-19-09 04:04 PM
who knows where life will take us... i suppose without the lapses of happiness/love we are not truly complete.. thanks again for reading!