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lunaeco
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1. "RE: Hangman"
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tonygee, this is good. I'd like to see something more personal, and also, check the wording a little. No need for "like":

"my time to rise
hovering five feet above the dandelions
i'm the talk of the town"

bless

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my
blue
song
http://au.briefcase.yahoo.com/bc/lilibluu/lst?&.dir=/blue/blue+thoughts+lunavamoloonerdco&.src=bc&.view=l

  
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Hangman [View all] , tonygee, Sun Sep-03-06 01:04 PM
 
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