Inner Demons: Ummm, I like artists that flow like it's their life's blood, like they HAVE to, they ain't got a choice. You sound a little bored. You have a good enough sense of rhythm, your voice is decent (if unpassionet) and there's even a couple clever rhymes, but people don't really want to hear an emcee wallow in self-pity, which is how you come off.

The beat had a groove but was uncreative and got old.

Keep building, I'll keep checking for future stuff.