Comin For Ya: This is pretting hot. Got that Camp Lo feel. Sometimes the beat get's lost when you do to much vocal layering or when the beat cuts out but drops back in in an unnatural sounding spot.

And how long were your verses? If they're longer than 16 bars cut them muthas down. Make you point then let the music play and the listener flow along to the hook.

But all in all hot.

Peace,

~Toe