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rubbersoulonice
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1. "Mother Naked"
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Sun Jul-16-06 02:49 PM by rubbersoulonice

  

          

Mother naked I lay
With the breeze passing over me
The ceiling the white of forgotten messages
Tunes drifting though the room could have been written for this moment
Mother naked I know
She's determined now
Mercy will not pass the barrier of her teeth
and
Mother naked it's reeling and
Mother naked I move to the window and look at the Bronx
Veiled kingdom
It's no longer her mercy that I need
Just to know
Grace hasn't died in her
Mother naked I smile
And look for messages on the ceiling
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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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I looked up [View all] , rubbersoulonice, Sun Jul-16-06 02:28 PM
 
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RE: I looked up
Jul 17th 2006
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RE: I looked up
Jul 17th 2006
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LOL...he keeps you comin' back too huh?
Jul 23rd 2006
6
      sometimes, in all heterosexual-ness, i'm
Jul 23rd 2006
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           aiight
Jul 23rd 2006
9
                dude, you act like all this homosocial love...
Aug 04th 2006
16
This looks easy
Jul 18th 2006
4
RE: I looked up
Jul 20th 2006
5
this
Jul 23rd 2006
7
classic
Jul 25th 2006
10
RE: I looked up
Jul 26th 2006
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RE: I looked up
Jul 26th 2006
12
your username has always been intriguing to me
Jul 26th 2006
13
inspiring.
Jul 27th 2006
14
RE: I looked up
Jul 28th 2006
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