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remarkable_thoughtz09
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Tue Dec-22-09 03:58 AM

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"~DEAD SILENCE~"
Tue Dec-22-09 03:59 AM by remarkable_thoughtz0

          


im just getting back into writing so please dont judge me. this was something that was just on my heart and i just want a lil feedback...

ALONE...

like a cold breeze in the middle of the night

dead silence, not even the sound of a local footstep

nonetheless , a footstep at all

the leaves fall ... wind blows like a mighty hurricane

damned and slain, without a trace of pain

sad drops of rain... covers my window pane.

no tears of joy just sorrow

hoping and praying for another tomorrow

but thats not in my future ...

my futures like my past...

full of lost lust, empty like a plaster cast

heading for DISAS ...TER

no strength to bear bad new

lost without hope, without fear, without clues

mad blues

cant wrap my mind around all that, its time to fall back

COLD ... like a breeze in the middle of the night

like im ALONE ... DEAD SILENCE

  

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~DEAD SILENCE~ [View all] , remarkable_thoughtz09, Tue Dec-22-09 03:58 AM
 
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