I’ma be honest with you dude … these jaunts need some work …
You don’t want to run the same loop over and over again … it helps if you taken any kinda for music course been in band … chorus etc… what youn need are variations of the beat an introo the main beat the hook and a bridge … instead of letting the same thing ride thru the whole track and if you gonna have the talking in the beat save that for the hook … or the bridge not when a cat suppose to be rhyming … you know I actually listened to the full selection of beats the first time you posted them but because I don’t come here as often I I used to never got around to actually replying … and be cause I have a rep for shitting on cats I was reluctant to reply … but I think you can do something with what you got going on here man it just takes a lil more time …. And if you want my feed back on anything else man just hit me in the inbox I get it when I come in …. peace

by the way ... this was my first beat ... with me ryhmin and the best part's cameo http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=4605269&q=hi

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