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Topic subject | jayech... new beats for critique |
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71786, jayech... new beats for critique Posted by jhall104, Tue Dec-25-07 05:24 PM
""jayech... new beats for critique""
Checkout the three newest beats www.soundclick.com/jayech Advice and pointers are appreciated.
jayech
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71789, RE: jayech... new beats for critique Posted by Zin, Tue Dec-25-07 10:59 PM
Ima be honest with you dude
these jaunts need some work
You dont want to run the same loop over and over again
it helps if you taken any kinda for music course been in band
chorus etc
what youn need are variations of the beat an introo the main beat the hook and a bridge
instead of letting the same thing ride thru the whole track and if you gonna have the talking in the beat save that for the hook
or the bridge not when a cat suppose to be rhyming
you know I actually listened to the full selection of beats the first time you posted them but because I dont come here as often I I used to never got around to actually replying
and be cause I have a rep for shitting on cats I was reluctant to reply
but I think you can do something with what you got going on here man it just takes a lil more time
. And if you want my feed back on anything else man just hit me in the inbox I get it when I come in
. peace
by the way ... this was my first beat ... with me ryhmin and the best part's cameo http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=4605269&q=hi
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71790, RE: jayech... new beats for critique Posted by Zin, Tue Dec-25-07 11:07 PM
and this is the ... page with my beat maker on it http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=109035
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