you really put the feeling of "death" into this piece. at least for me, i could... feel the actions, the swiftness, the finality of it all. especially in the following lines:And it takes withoutHesitationI’m not lookingWhere it strikes nextBut I’m hopingThat it takes me last*nods*-----------------------------------book1|http://www.lulu.com/content/132318 http://msmind.wordpress.comhttp://www.clutchmagazine.comi ain't rockin' wit' you, your logicdoes not compute ©The Coup