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PhotoSynthesis
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Mon Mar-12-07 10:21 PM

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5. "Well, At Least U Recognize ..."
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But forreal tho, this flow had a story~tellin' steeze that kinda pulls the reader in for a closer look -- Yet you snapped the book shut with the last line.

>I'll kiss yo bitch ass in the mouth ...

The impact is there -- But the story seems UNFINISHED!

Never~The~Less -- It's nice to C U doing something different with your steelo -- *Multi~Faceted/Multi~Talented* Aren't ya? --


Carry On ...




A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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I call this ....Recognizing what a bitch wants [View all] , Zin, Mon Mar-12-07 06:09 PM
 
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RE: I call this ....Recognizing what a bitch wants
Mar 12th 2007
1
roflmao
Mar 18th 2007
11
      gotta up this again
Mar 27th 2007
12
      RE: roflmao
Mar 28th 2007
15
RE: I call this ....Recognizing what a bitch wants
Mar 12th 2007
2
lmao
Mar 12th 2007
3
shhhhhhh ........lmao !!!!!!
Mar 12th 2007
4
Zin daps homie
Mar 13th 2007
6
Dope storytelling playa
Mar 13th 2007
7
Slick Raps
Mar 15th 2007
8
.
Mar 15th 2007
9
RE: I call this ....Recognizing what a bitch wants
Mar 16th 2007
10
yo im sorry
Mar 27th 2007
13
I love the I call this..... HA!
Mar 28th 2007
14
Zin is dead.
Mar 28th 2007
16
why do these fake ass clowns
Mar 28th 2007
17
      RE: why do these fake ass clowns
Mar 28th 2007
18
           lol
Mar 28th 2007
19
                two fingers
Mar 28th 2007
20
                     wtf????
Mar 29th 2007
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                          RE: wtf????
Mar 29th 2007
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                               RE: wtf????
Mar 29th 2007
23
                                    LOL this cat reminds me of Clubber Lang
Mar 29th 2007
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archive?
Apr 02nd 2007
25
up.
Apr 02nd 2007
26
ha
Apr 02nd 2007
27
up again
Apr 03rd 2007
28
archive please!
Apr 18th 2007
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