As she spoke I could hear the quiver in her tone …
The quiver of fear ….
Most alpha males can smell the fear a scared female …
And at this moment she reeked of fear…

He stood there watching as she ranted and raved on about
This and that …
About how no man had or would beat her …

And instead of making a scene in public he let her put on a show for
Her new found fan base …
He knew that by smacking her …he still wouldn’t win …
She would still win because he acknowledged the fact
And she would get the attention she craved …
That she wasn’t getting at home …

Listening to the moans of how she had …been done wrong
And how here new nukkas were the best nukkas doing it
He laughed and rocked back in his chair
And admired the show she put on
For her new found fan club ….

I'll kiss yo bitch ass in the mouth ...

whoa zin is that you
naw'll can't be this was aight
i enjoyed that

ending it well
and i kissed that b in the mouth
what she do suckanother nukkas stick then lick
on your sagging lip

heat up some hot pockets and drop the celly
and maybe we can talk about it watching naruto

lamo ahaha hahah

TE-TE
The End - To Everybody

tonka u be buggin! hahhahah
aw mayun but Zin i liked this peice

different from u

i c the maturity
>>>>>>
shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


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this post was mad funny archivable classic shit



shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


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always on the cutting edge
watch out and don't step of that ledge
because it will cost everything you've got
no not those thongs no not that sad love song
no not that wrong over price answer
call me a dancer of jazz keys
and stinging peoples reality african killer bee
i c u on my shoe string trying to keep
up so what you think i'm trip
ping over you and the things you do
maybe becaue i love you
oh it's true this cyber space
athem but you say i can't stand him
but in a way i love him
he make me smile

hahaha lol
road call
fuck all ya'll
i'm be a dawg barking to i die

take alot of humility to be dat man
damn take alot of sanity too

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

"if heads only new".....riiiiiight

lmao

:P


But forreal tho, this flow had a story~tellin' steeze that kinda pulls the reader in for a closer look -- Yet you snapped the book shut with the last line.

>I'll kiss yo bitch ass in the mouth ...

The impact is there -- But the story seems UNFINISHED!

Never~The~Less -- It's nice to C U doing something different with your steelo -- *Multi~Faceted/Multi~Talented* Aren't ya? -- ;)


Carry On ...

yo, this shit right here nigga!
this shit right here!

pardon my tongue but that there is something else.

peace


"everyone like spectacular pass me the ordinary, da peanut butter and jelly to da lobster and shrimp, the o' oh thats him, to the mobsters and pimps" - ME, dammit!

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Stone cold

Sike.


"Nigga say my name"



Sound Familiar?




I thought so.

.

This was real solid, I liked the storytelling skills on display here and showed the intelligence to swallow the pride, lettin her put on the show. Lotta people can probably relate to this nice piece

i laughed my way through this entire post liek straight cryin



shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


...www.soundclick.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html

Good piece. Keep shining

maybe one day I'll be inspired

reek of fear my G reek cut ya nuts turn a fake bull to feeder steer
ya here? raw Y R type puts Zin in yesteryear
electrify electrocute I'm rocking with the true choir
E state executor bring it I'm the wack rime refuter
pulled up high like soccer socks on lady hip hop's thighs
I'm s'hip s'hop and it's time for clowns to die
tell you about s'pear when I'm drinking raw rye
curved blade sharp on on side saw toothed on the other side
with a hook to pull down wack ridaz bruce lee like the bride
I'm takin fake ass niggaz to the real side
blade cut through your guts and saw blade hack ya spine
now you a lame ass dead man and I'm pissing on your rime

keep trying to make me come out ya'll want to see some real mcing so want you do ya'll must be still gone off the 10 post commmandments ....lol get this bull shit out of here read it good i refuse to give ya cumbs the attetion you need that goes for you and you and you and you and you tooo

shoot a rime, coward.

you been checking my stats ...but it gonna take alil more than a bulls shit ass alias ....and rhyming words at the end of sentences ....not to mention cheap ass retorts like that to make me rhyme at you clown...

fake ass bitch nigga I bring the raw down, the war down, the lightnen down. You a slave in a plato's cave throwin raves, idols of the market, Rostov country squire throwin stones brak'n mirrors. Die Muthafucka.

see extremeist be taking this shit too far ....

I don't think taking shit to far against Zin is possible. Throw a riot ryme, you complacent ass convenience addict bitch on some wack dick. Wake people up if you want me to stop.

I already killed you with a horror ryme. Can you bring that style? This is Vet vs. Doctor style, and I can tell all you got is fake ass bullshit.

nm

shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


...www.soundclick.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html

>I'll kiss yo bitch ass in the mouth ...

pause.

but yea, that flipped the whole thing for me.

nah you got to understand my logic be hind this whole piece ....

shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


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www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq
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www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html

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