I'm NOT a haiku expert -- But I know what I like, and I like this! --
Now ...
While you're waiting for some feedback and constructive crit on YOUR work -- Be sure and peep other folks work and respond.
*Give summm / Git summm*
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥