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lunaeco
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Sun Sep-17-06 06:57 AM

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1. "RE: Just deserts."
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I like the personal power style of this piece.
Don't know if I'd trust the "no oven mitts" part -got burn last week, literally, so don't remind me please. Solid flow and mizing in the words and rhymes, so keep on keeping on doing what ypi dp with words.
bless

"undescribable verbs,
>occur when i transfer the poetics,
>mixed with the genetics,
>and collect this,
>this young blitz,spits fire,no need for oven mitts,
>and clips insert when i drop,its a desSert"

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my
blue
song
http://au.briefcase.yahoo.com/bc/lilibluu/lst?&.dir=/blue/blue+thoughts+lunavamoloonerdco&.src=bc&.view=l

  

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Just deserts. [View all] , ak_reborn, Sat Sep-16-06 02:50 PM
 
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