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|Topic subject||Just deserts.|
60358, Just deserts.|
Posted by ak_reborn, Sat Sep-16-06 02:50 PM
Yo,i drop bombs against the mass,
never settle for second class,
straight ghetto,gun metal,
curves so superb,undescribable verbs,
occur when i transfer the poetics,
mixed with the genetics,
and collect this,
this young blitz,spits fire,no need for oven mitts,
and clips insert when i drop,its a desert,
a trifle to ya ears,
spit that fear,
listen real clear,
when i drop,ya ear drums pop,
see how the police start using glocks,
promoting gun violence coz i broke the silence.
60365, RE: Just deserts.|
Posted by lunaeco, Sun Sep-17-06 06:57 AM
I like the personal power style of this piece.
Don't know if I'd trust the "no oven mitts" part -got burn last week, literally, so don't remind me please. Solid flow and mizing in the words and rhymes, so keep on keeping on doing what ypi dp with words.
>occur when i transfer the poetics,
>mixed with the genetics,
>and collect this,
>this young blitz,spits fire,no need for oven mitts,
>and clips insert when i drop,its a desSert"
60368, RE: Just deserts.|
Posted by ak_reborn, Sun Sep-17-06 07:36 AM
Thanks for peepin,see you round.