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Giovanni
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Sun Sep-17-06 01:45 AM

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"new piece (title welcomed)"


          

the kids shrill over
the music, tagging each
other with super-soakers,

whipping through a street
littered with empty hug bottles
and candy wrappers

i stumble upon police
tape lining a neighborhood
where blaring speakers

are piled like totems
above the bodies
sweaty from riding back-

beats a Dj unleashes
from his makeshift booth
among the row houses'

warped wooden porches
of scattered dominoes
and shuffled cards

-----sig starts here-----
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"Transfer"? Just visit http://myspace.com/alanking81

or

http://myspace.com/bustransfer
(see what people are saying
about "Transfer")

"I used to walk through the valley
like Psalms 27"
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new piece (title welcomed) [View all] , Giovanni, Sun Sep-17-06 01:45 AM
 
Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: new piece (title welcomed)
Sep 17th 2006
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and it is
Sep 17th 2006
2
RE: new piece (title welcomed)
Sep 18th 2006
3
RE: new piece (title welcomed)
Sep 19th 2006
5
RE: new piece (title welcomed)
Sep 19th 2006
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RE: new piece (title welcomed)
Sep 19th 2006
7
RE: new piece (title welcomed)
Sep 18th 2006
4
REVISION!!!
Sep 20th 2006
8
i looked at this yesterday
Sep 21st 2006
9

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