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Subject: "Critique this shot please. "
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lightworks
Member since Feb 17th 2006
5818 posts
Mon Sep-07-15 12:55 PM
"Critique this shot please. "
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crop it. increase focal point.
double negative
Sep 07th 2015
1
^^^^^^
RobOne4
Sep 07th 2015
3
Interesting. I had it window window window and if felt cramped.
lightworks
Sep 07th 2015
4
shit, you could crop it down to just two windows it would still work.
double negative
Sep 07th 2015
6
I was hoping to get that 3rd window in the shot
bentagain
Sep 08th 2015
19
the elements need to be odd.
Kwesi
Sep 08th 2015
21
I dig it & already liked it. Reminds me of this Rober Frank shot
exactopposite
Sep 07th 2015
2
Thanks! Oh that's you eh? Dope.
lightworks
Sep 07th 2015
5
Robert Frank "The Americans" totally changed the game
exactopposite
Sep 09th 2015
31
i like it. could we see with a sharper focal point?
Garhart Poppwell
Sep 07th 2015
7
It's with an iPhone so no lol.
lightworks
Sep 07th 2015
8
being a phone, i think your composition is supposed to be spot-on.
Kwesi
Sep 08th 2015
16
you still shooting with the DSLR?
double negative
Sep 08th 2015
20
Yup. Just don't have it on me 24/7 like I do my phone.
lightworks
Sep 08th 2015
26
For the REAL people that will see it, it's good. leave it alone.
Case_One
Sep 07th 2015
9
ehh i think you are wrong
madwriter
Sep 08th 2015
10
imo, there shouldn't be "right" or "wrong" in art. its all subjective, n...
Damali
Sep 08th 2015
29
SHIT. IM NOT REAL. SOMEBODY CALL THE POLICE.
double negative
Sep 08th 2015
14
You're an Etch A Sketch.. LOL
Case_One
Sep 08th 2015
25
Good lord, can you shoot something other than the metro????
WarriorPoet415
Sep 08th 2015
11
good pioint.
Kwesi
Sep 08th 2015
12
maybe, maybe not.
double negative
Sep 08th 2015
15
I'm gonna err with maybe not....
WarriorPoet415
Sep 08th 2015
17
right. i hear you
double negative
Sep 08th 2015
18
Look through my feed. There are more than just metro shots.
lightworks
Sep 08th 2015
27
I like it, but I like this other one you took even more
chillinCHiEF
Sep 08th 2015
13
yeah this one is real dope
gumz
Sep 08th 2015
22
yup.
dapitts08
Sep 08th 2015
23
Yep.
Monkey Genius
Sep 08th 2015
24
yeah this one is really good
KiloMcG
Sep 08th 2015
28
oh yeah. this sht is fire
exactopposite
Sep 09th 2015
30
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