love the word usage and how it flowed? i mean i'm kinda confused are these just "general verses" or battle verses because if i vote 2 i can't for a battle verse because there werent alot of stabs in there... even tho it was a nice verse - I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs... www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net