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Zin
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"WNF 5 The Illest Mc? You make the call !!!"


  

          

Yes Yes Yall .it ya boy Zugga Zin back for another installation of the WNF . This week I have a special treat for all of you underdog / low post count mcees .earlier this week I was searching for the illest verse written .and since this weeks WNF seemed like a bust I decided to take matters in my own hands so I took three mcs verses and Ill let you decide whos the illest . Let do this ..


MC#1

peep my 3 mile style/
thousand island and wild/
superman ray bans/
see you coming a mile
looking like louis vuton
longarm hanging with Sean
crooked tooth cookiemonster
crawling searching for crumbs
rodney king had a dream
can't we all get along
but i proceed to drop bombs
and put you where you belong
back seat maybe trunk
it depends on your moms
didn't mean to go there
but you stepped in the square
for this game of electric musical chair
leave you ass out
like the picture of Cher
never learned to share
so i'm taking your shine
leave your life shorter
then the width of a dime

mc#2

Theres a side of me thats clinical,
cold, maybe a matter of derision,
revision tells me i learned it from the chatter of television,
regardless i diseregard peoples points of vision,
20-20, i see so well, i get premonitions,
i draw the stars on my canvas with inivisible ink,
i've reached the brink, missing links in what i think,
disconnected, i stay dissafected,
politics, are hollow bricks that can never be dissected,
not expected to conform, just not to rise against,
what is considered sense my objectives have been condensed,
to the basic, action creates reaction,
satisfaction found in death,
through drinking meths, to gain abstraction,
out of breath, finally i cease to function
the last anomoly, like enconomies, crashing at the junction


MC#3

Yo, peep the translation
Of this ill rhyme demonstration
Break out the Timb boots
And Adida sweat suits
Youre now witnessed to the special occasion
For words that require a standing ovation
At the venue I continue to amaze
Speak straight forward
Striking kids right in their rib cage
Throw raps & aim them at your favorite icon
My grip on the mic resembles that of a python
Ha, yea I know they hate us
Want to send us on a permanent hiatus
Just peep the technique and style
Kodak flashes capture the ill profile
Empros flow touches you scary niggas in private places
Somethin similar to a pedophile
Rhyme rapture
Captures conscious minds from Illadel
Down to the Nile
Meanwhile, peep how I get in this
Hate me like your arch nemesis
My world records exceed those in Genius
Yes, this lyricists leaves weak minded cats
With slit writs
Better yet, its euthanasia
Before you stray too far away from that white light
Prey that God saves ya
Cuz I groove to the wickedness that the Devil approves
So basically I can do whatever with you
Stop actin brand new
Im more live than the freak nasty crew
That made asses shake
Fuck plate tectonics
I make the earthquake
Only with time will my wit grow quicker
With so much skill, you gotta measure my weight
In rector.

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WNF 5 The Illest Mc? You make the call !!!
Oct 26th 2005
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RE: WNF 5 The Illest Mc? You make the call !!!
Oct 26th 2005
2
#2
Oct 26th 2005
3
*post bills*
Oct 26th 2005
4
tough, but I'm going with #1
Oct 26th 2005
5
I'm going with #3
Oct 26th 2005
6
# 2
Oct 26th 2005
7
oh and...
Oct 26th 2005
8
#2
Oct 26th 2005
9
#3
Oct 27th 2005
10
RE: WNF 5 The Illest Mc? You make the call !!!
Oct 28th 2005
11
Key of A Kings Heart
Oct 28th 2005
12
RE: WNF 5 The Illest Mc? You make the call !!!
Oct 30th 2005
13
Your illest MCee mesthebronzeman
Nov 01st 2005
14
RE: Your illest MCee mesthebronzeman
Nov 01st 2005
15
*screams in agony*
Nov 01st 2005
16
nothing new this week?
Nov 02nd 2005
17
RE: nothing new this week?
Nov 03rd 2005
18
      RE: nothing new this week?
Nov 03rd 2005
19
      nah mofo's be acting like they too good for this shit
Nov 04th 2005
20
           RE: nah mofo's be acting like they too good for this shit
Nov 05th 2005
22
      RE: nothing new this week?
Nov 05th 2005
21
           what is the difference
Nov 06th 2005
23
RE: WNF 5 The Illest Mc? You make the call !!!
Nov 07th 2005
24
WNF
Nov 08th 2005
25

Shakeet Lokh Em
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1. "WNF 5 The Illest Mc? You make the call !!!"
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My vote goes to Mystery Emcee #1. The punches and rhyme scheme were concise and crisp. And I liked the edge it had overall. I thought it was a really good verse.

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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the_best_part
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Wed Oct-26-05 02:55 PM

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2. "RE: WNF 5 The Illest Mc? You make the call !!!"
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number 2.

@asiaradiant

  

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MiracleRic
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3. "#2"
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although i wasnt especially impressed with any of them

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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blak_yukon
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4. "*post bills*"
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http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/4466/flyer8rq.gif

i'mma go with #2...for top to bottom spit, no filler IMO.

blk

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Whateva
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Wed Oct-26-05 03:54 PM

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5. "tough, but I'm going with #1"
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Something about it feels right. The word selection and cadence is on point. It's deceptively simple looking, but it's effective. He/she could rework some of the references though IMO.

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Why do "scientists" constantly produce statistics based on "race", a social construct?

  

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Soulbrotha
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6. "I'm going with #3"
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I just felt his verse was more potent, lyrical and better balanced in terms of overall content and poignancy.

"Do to others what you would others have done unto you." - The Lord Jesus Christ

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Ezzsential
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Wed Oct-26-05 05:57 PM

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7. "# 2"
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love the word usage and how it flowed?
i mean i'm kinda confused are these just "general verses" or battle verses because if i vote 2 i can't for a battle verse because there werent alot of stabs in there...
even tho it was a nice verse
- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

  

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Ezzsential
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8. "oh and..."
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good idea not naming the emcees just putting numbers cuz that eliminates the popularity thing
(wink)
- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

  

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Auriz Deep
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Wed Oct-26-05 07:27 PM

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9. "#2"
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Well, I'm pretty sure I know who the 3rd MC is... But i dunno... these weren't exactly, in my eyes, the best that have been posted. These all have a lot of technical issues... but I'd have 2 say

#2...
But just by a little bit.

But I'm juss takin that shit outta context.

  

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Don_Gorgon
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Thu Oct-27-05 07:57 AM

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10. "#3"
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it just flowed better to me

"I no come to hear about how horse dead an' cow fat"

  

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Prolif
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11. "RE: WNF 5 The Illest Mc? You make the call !!!"
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Vote: #1 for flow/cadence


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/lifthalegend_music.htm

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King MM
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12. "Key of A Kings Heart"
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*Unlock My Wieghted Heart-I Await*
-Your Voice on the Mic-Lifes Hard To Fade-
I remain in your Heart To Stay*
-Something Like a Classic Car I Sustain-

"-If I Had The Balls To Step To You I'd Flaunt It-Like Deez Lemons"


-My Ice Gleam is a Ice Dream-

Drop It? Puffin-Play-Fair-Pop-it?
Light you High in the Air-High
Where Rockets N' Comets Move Across the Sky
*Sparkling-Smarting Like A Smarty-I Hear You Rise-
Like J.C. did back at the beginning-Have You Seen The End?

"-Treat Life Like Communion Lightly Toast-it Golden-Notta Crisp-"

-Son-Lately-Droppin Lotta Lips-Light Up Your Eyes Even If I Lisp-

Green Falling Clovers Dawn My Whine-As Don of my own life
-I Will Never Fade by Casting Blame Put You to Shame
-When we have words Exchange-You'll Search for Peace N' Love ina Happy Place*-"Run!"-My heart out its cage of Pain-Dawn the Dawn A
Brand new Day-Drank N'Thank-You-Vinne-Vinne-Viche'-

*Unlock My Wieghted Heart-I Await*
-Your Voice on the Mic-Lifes Hard To Fade-
I remain in your Heart To Stay*
-Something Like a Classic Car I Sustain-

My Bright Shine Divides N' Releases Pain N' Rays
Reaping Tragic N' Havok on Hate-Feel The Heat O' Day

"-Feel The Flames As I Shine-Shimmering at You-Diamonds-Super Sized Like Ice Cubes-Dazed N' Confused? I Macked You-King MM Smacked You-Drop Down to the Shaq Fu-"

Black-Lights? Stage-Fright? Bitch This is my Mic-
I will win this light-this stage as a Gemstar I will
crush Gems-Like Bain-My Reckoning Im a rock on this mic
spittin stones-rippling across water and hittin yo' home-

"Terror-Talks-Ho-Faith-Walks-Yo'-Truth-Saves-Holmes"

Whoah!-We see the Light-Beyond Years-We See the Fight
Brings us to Tears-Hate Feel The Might of these Ink Shears
Cuttin this Paper-Putting Together Your Fears-

"You Unlocked My Heart Thus Begins My Career"

*Unlock My Wieghted Heart-I Await*
-Your Voice on the Mic-Lifes Hard To Fade-
I remain in your Heart To Stay*
-Something Like a Classic Car I Sustain-


  

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FuriousStyles
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13. "RE: WNF 5 The Illest Mc? You make the call !!!"
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#1, simple but effective.


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I'm smarter than I act; Trust me.

I'm looking for a woman that loves real music, any suggestions?

Current Playlist:
Nas-Illmatic
Little Brother-The Minstrel Show
Blackalicious-The Craft
Leela James-A Change is Go

  

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Zin
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14. "Your illest MCee mesthebronzeman"
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yeah

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mesthebronzeman
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15. "RE: Your illest MCee mesthebronzeman"
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cheers, i think my piece needs to be read in terms of enjament for it to flow, theres lines which the two lines need to be read as one sentence but still

  

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Rajeniro757
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16. "*screams in agony*"
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oh well term paper liqour time

R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-

  

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hdub
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17. "nothing new this week?"
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this shit is losing some momentum

...(the end)...

  

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Deception 101
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18. "RE: nothing new this week?"
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Hey, this was supposed to be yours truly vs MiracleRic but ay, I guess
either something came up or whatever.
The mystery unfolds...........
GAME

Grand Ultimate

  

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hdub
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19. "RE: nothing new this week?"
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no offense man but you havent won one fo these- i dont think it was "supposed to be" you just cause you proclaimed it

and if it was thats more disintegration from how this could have been

i thought this was a cool idea seems to be losing momentum but i think we could still do a last minute resurrection

zin i know you dont like my ass but like i said its a cool idea so get at me if you busy these days and need a guest host- you know id stir shit back up

...(the end)...

  

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Zin
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20. "nah mofo's be acting like they too good for this shit"
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Fri Nov-04-05 06:36 PM by Zin

  

          

i mean these mofo's on some next shit mannnnnnn fuck it
like this mofo here ...he was suppose to send me his verse ....
where the fuck is it? huh? .........

ayo man this whole board is starting to stink to me....

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hdub
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22. "RE: nah mofo's be acting like they too good for this shit"
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i got to agree shit does seem to be getting a bit sleepy around here

too bad tho i really dug this idea- if you ever want to try to resurrect it know im down to help in any way i can

...(the end)...

  

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Deception 101
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21. "RE: nothing new this week?"
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Ayo, Zin I e-mailed you that verse dog.
Literal heat, and like Wednesday I'm checking and checking but no post.
If you want we can redo this. I'm always game.
Also check me vs Samuarai Shampoo!!!
GAME

Grand Ultimate

  

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Zin
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23. "what is the difference"
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between an inbox and a e mail huh?

the inbox come to my okayplay account ...your email ets blocked why cause i don't know you ....ya feel me ?

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tonka truck
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24. "RE: WNF 5 The Illest Mc? You make the call !!!"
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this shit is like beer drunken stupid
pissing bars bumper cars who wrote it
crashing into ash trays need to reblaze and spit
again out of wind face it yeah nigga's can't beat it
all on each other dickies grow the fuck up and buy
some levi's and go rub on a girls thighs
just dropping in to say high

  

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Zin
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25. "WNF"
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will return after the king of the ring tourney

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