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the perfect mistake
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9. "i am telling u rite now... i wish i were lizzie..."
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for these lines alone:

Romeo is still bleeding,
and no one cares.

her
eyes
made
me
want-

to be a poet.

slurred words match
the hue of two of
the most unforgiving
disciples my i's have
encountered.

pure unadulterated... gold... *nods*







================





On
the corner of hope
and nowhere

i stood. İrevion

  

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where king james has failed, [View all] , hunuh, Tue Mar-01-05 06:46 AM
 
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aight!
Mar 01st 2005
1
nope.
Mar 01st 2005
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      RE: nope.
Mar 01st 2005
5
           interpretation
Mar 01st 2005
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           RE: interpretation
Mar 01st 2005
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           RE: nope.
Mar 01st 2005
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this is tuff
Mar 01st 2005
2
the only way man.
Mar 01st 2005
4
RE: where king james has failed,
Mar 01st 2005
10
Two Words ...
Mar 01st 2005
11
up.
Mar 02nd 2005
12
RE: where king james has failed,
Mar 03rd 2005
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RE: where king james has failed,
Mar 03rd 2005
14
never read your work before...
Mar 03rd 2005
15
up.
Mar 06th 2005
16
archive
Apr 04th 2005
17
again
Jul 21st 2005
19
RE: where king james has failed,
Apr 04th 2005
18

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