i will not.

her pupils were
the greatest
teachers i've ever known.
a muse with a noose,
we talked in the tongues
of pictures past.
a stoic pose
brought about heroic prose.
had she blinked
this ink would
no longer be sufficient,
an epic story cut short.

Romeo is still bleeding,
and no one cares.

her
eyes
made
me
want-

to be a poet.

slurred words match
the hue of two of
the most unforgiving
disciples my i's have
encountered. blasphemy
birthed these idle
hands that carress my
soul with a choke hold.

the gospel of gentics

made an untainted page
breath, inanimate life
follows, accustomed to
her light, and lives by
the grace of my pen.
the sin in the innocence
of a broken verse,
petty nouns and verbs
obscure poetic justice.

so
in
the
spirit
of
salvation-

god did away with black and white pictures.

sacrificed a broken
social scene's heretic
hobby. revisionist pictoral
history forever banned
as long as my words stand.

holy mandates
and my own
colloquial curiosity.

thank you.

(for lizzie.)

has she read this?

"a muse with a noose"

word to that.



***********************************


"At least embarrassment is not an imitation.
It's intimacy for beginners,
the orgasm no one cares to fake.
I almost admire it. I almost wrote despise." -Alice Fulton

"The future is a grey seagull
Tattling in its cat-voice of departure.
Age and terror, like nurses, attend her,
And a drowned man, complaining of the great cold,
Crawls up out of the sea."
-Sylvia Plath

"I would like to be the air
that inhabits you for a moment
only. I would like to be that unnoticed
& that necessary." -Margaret Atwood

idk how it sounds or comes across, so it stays hidden for a while.

no doubt.

i dropped this muse poem on a longtime friend/love interest of mine and all she said was "that's real nice"...

i'm thinking, damn, that's it.
i hate expectation.


***********************************


"At least embarrassment is not an imitation.
It's intimacy for beginners,
the orgasm no one cares to fake.
I almost admire it. I almost wrote despise." -Alice Fulton

"The future is a grey seagull
Tattling in its cat-voice of departure.
Age and terror, like nurses, attend her,
And a drowned man, complaining of the great cold,
Crawls up out of the sea."
-Sylvia Plath

"I would like to be the air
that inhabits you for a moment
only. I would like to be that unnoticed
& that necessary." -Margaret Atwood

worries me more than anything.

because it can be taken two ways and both can be cool but one can make things way too awkward.

this piece is just a thank you, but it can complicate the living hell out of things lol.

i agree.

***********************************


"At least embarrassment is not an imitation.
It's intimacy for beginners,
the orgasm no one cares to fake.
I almost admire it. I almost wrote despise." -Alice Fulton

"The future is a grey seagull
Tattling in its cat-voice of departure.
Age and terror, like nurses, attend her,
And a drowned man, complaining of the great cold,
Crawls up out of the sea."
-Sylvia Plath

"I would like to be the air
that inhabits you for a moment
only. I would like to be that unnoticed
& that necessary." -Margaret Atwood

that's real nice"...

i'm thinking, damn, that's it.
i hate expectation.

...agreed. i'll reply in a minute huhtah...

-Otto

a muse with a noose,
we talked in the tongues
of pictures past.


ima fry u sum fish
and make u sum red rice
cole slaw
iced tea for this one
basket of shrimp

for these lines alone:

Romeo is still bleeding,
and no one cares.

her
eyes
made
me
want-

to be a poet.

slurred words match
the hue of two of
the most unforgiving
disciples my i's have
encountered.

pure unadulterated... gold... *nods*







================





On
the corner of hope
and nowhere

i stood. ©revion

you fused words and thoughts that somehow became a gateway a black hole even now what happens beyond the beyond? I'm out here, in here, please come and get me...


ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
checkout these sites
http://4luvofpoetry.com
www.poetology.com

*Simply Awesome*

god did away with black and white pictures.

sacrificed a broken
social scene's heretic
hobby. revisionist pictoral
history forever banned
as long as my words stand.

holy mandates
and my own
colloquial curiosity.


i really liked this. the pace of the words was so fast it was as if you're running out of time and you're trying to get as many words out with as much meaning as possible.

Romeo is still bleeding,
and no one cares.

her
eyes
made
me
want-

to be a poet.

...damn, i wish *I* were lizzie...

eww. nah, but this is just amazing!

-Otto

gonna have to,ha...

nice,
blk


you will like vicversus...


This for yall keeping them bills payed / gas in the car with whatevers left / keeping something on the plate.(c) i said it.


http://uncleblaksplace.blogspot.com/

A nice dedication. Liking the feel of this.