well hdub wins again ric, his verse was immaculate.. i hate to say it.... but you know what.. i've seen u battle better... ELIMINATE THE COMMAS PLEEEEEEEEEEZ! and bar ur shit put some work into it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
rhyme the last word in a bar with the first in the next bar or something
but here's ur best lines:
>queefs theme, play this at night, while I eat spleens, >understandable splooge gets, stuck on ya crew's lips, >this Moulin Rouge chick, >needs to be schooled quick on who’s sick, >u abuse ric? please, that’s a fraudulent newsclip